Zacktheflash96 Posted January 16, 2013 Report Share Posted January 16, 2013 [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/169615.jpg[/img] Why waste time damaging your opponent when you can erase his cards from existence? Only constructive feedback is welcome ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 16, 2013 Report Share Posted January 16, 2013 It would be OK if it didn't have the Tribute-a-monster cost, since you need 2 Level 6 monsters, plus a sacrifice, to get him to work; it would also help if he detached for his effect instead of triggering. You would need to destroy an Attack Position monster by battle (I assume you meant "Battle Damage dealt to your opponent") and there have to be 2 face-up cards to banish. There's no card to compare this to directly, but I think you could change the effect to something [i]like[/i] [i]"Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 2 face-up cards; banish them, also your opponent takes no damage this turn."[/i] [i]...[/i]if that wouldn't interfere with the flavor. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted January 16, 2013 Report Share Posted January 16, 2013 What the guy above me said, but I have a question. What happens if you don't have a monster to tribute? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 17, 2013 Report Share Posted January 17, 2013 [quote name='Admiral Tim' timestamp='1358222391' post='6123286'] What happens if you don't have a monster to tribute? [/quote] You would be forced to Tribute Ferax. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacktheflash96 Posted January 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 17, 2013 I seem to always manage to fail to make Xyz effects detach effects -_- thanks for the feedback guys i only felt the tribute was necessary because the eff seemed pretty harsh to me, but if you think it could work and not be bust then ill cut that bit out for now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SerooChann Posted January 18, 2013 Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 LORE correction: 2 level 6 DARK monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Tribute 1 monster on your side of the field. When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 2 face-up cards on the field; banish the targeted cards. If the effect of this card is activated; your opponent takes no Battle Damage involving this card till the End Phase of this turn. I find the last effect, rather, stupid. Because that effect activates AFTER the monster is destroyed and all damage calculations already happened so what's the point of the last one, maybe if you meant in general doesn't take damage from this card at all even if you used the effect or not. And it's pretty underpowered, 2 Level 6 monsters and then you need to tribute one? not really needed about that cost. Take it out and make the ATK 2400. For the OCG errors please refer to the topic "About OCG" in the following link. http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/293716-about-ocg/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 18, 2013 Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 LORE correction: 2 Level 6 DARK monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned: Tribute 1 monster. When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and target 2 face-up cards on the field; banish those targets, and if you do, your opponent takes no Battle Damage from battles involving this card this turn. This still needs some kind of boost. If you took out the Tribute, and the requirement that the cards be face-up, it would just be OK. It's not easy to trigger. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SerooChann Posted January 18, 2013 Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 This still needs some kind of boost. If you took out the Tribute, and the requirement that the cards be face-up, it would just be OK. It's not easy to trigger. Woops, Detach is not capitalized, thanks xD. I don't see any difference between the correction since you only just shrunk it a little bit more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zacktheflash96 Posted January 18, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 OCG is fixed and the effect was editted. Thanks for the help with OCG it will be a little ropey as i don't play as much anymore. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 18, 2013 Report Share Posted January 18, 2013 Also a note: Monsters are destroyed by battle before damage is inflicted, so the card would work as intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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