CoyoteStarrk1 Posted January 19, 2013 Report Share Posted January 19, 2013 Can I have some feedback pls? This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Gaara's Rage". You take no Battle Damage from battles involving this card. Twice per turn, if this card would be destroyed, it isn't. This card is used to Ritual Summon "Shukaku the One Tailed Beast". You must also Tribute monsters from your hand or field whose total Levels equal 7 or more. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card gains 200 ATK for each Beast-Type monster in your Graveyard. During the End Phase of any turn this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can send 1 Aqua and 1 Beast-Type Monster Card from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card from the Graveyard. 3 Level 4 Beast-Type monsters Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card to target 1 face-up monster on the field with original ATK less than the ATK of this card; destroy that target. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to either the ATK or DEF (whichever is higher) of the destroyed monster in the Graveyard. Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; until the End Phase, its ATK is halved. Once per turn, discard your entire hand to destroy all your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards on the field. 1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner Aqua-Type monsters If this card targets an opponent's face-up Attack Position monster for an attack, and that monster is not destroyed by the battle, this card can attack the same monster again in a row. This effect can only be used twice per turn. This card cannot be Special Summoned. To Tribute Summon this card, you must Tribute 3 Beast-Type monsters. This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponent's Spells,Traps, or monsters. During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When a "Tailed Beast" monster is sent to your Graveyard by battle, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, banish it. Each time a "Tailed Beast" monster is removed from play, place 1 Spell Counter on this card (max. 7). You can send this face-up card with 7 Spell Counters on it to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 "Gedo Mazo" from your hand or Deck. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Tailed Beast Extraction". This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of your opponent's Spell, Traps or monsters. If this monster battles an opponent's monster, the opponent's monster's effect is negated during the Battle Phase only. When this monster is sent to your Graveyard by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Ten Tails" from your hand or Deck. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except with "Gedo Mazo". The Special Summon of this card cannot be negated. The player that Special Summons this card wins the Duel. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
and1dodger Posted January 19, 2013 Report Share Posted January 19, 2013 Matatabi the Tail Beast: hmm doesn't seem like it's worth running in a deck if it can't be special summoned. Normal summoning it would be tough and it's ATK gaining effect lookes bit weak, dark hole, bottomless and it's gone. :/ Son Goku The Four Tailed Beast - Kokuo The Five Tailed Beast : eh I think it's little underpowered but it's still good. Saiken The Six Tailed Beast: I wouldn't run it sorry :/ Chomei The Seven Tailed Best: I was about to say broken, but I see that it's a level 7, maybe add some special summoning ability. I'll be back to review the rest ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoyoteStarrk1 Posted January 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2013 what do u mean by underpowered? their effects or attack? what do u mean by you wouldn't run it? Is chomei ok? Should I make Matatabi a Level 6? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
and1dodger Posted January 21, 2013 Report Share Posted January 21, 2013 Tribute Summoning isn't the most convient way of summoning due to it's difficulty. It's even more difficult with one that requires 2 tributes. Matabi's special summoning restriction makes it even more difficult to hit the field. I would recomend it to become a 1 tribute. If you leave it as 2 tributes I suggest removing the Special summoning restrictions. Chomei has a pretty nice effect, worth tributing, though higher attacks are always preferable. Saiken, not very appealing because of it's low attack however I do see it as a stall card, it's effect to half a monsters Atk is nice. A card like this could combo well with A Legendary Ocean, if it were a five star monster. I've mention that I wouldn't have run it meaning I would use another card over it because again the tributing and low attack issue. Gyuki is perfect for floater type cards that happen to be in Atk position, like Zenmaines. Kokuo looks underpowered in terms of Atk. Kurama is pretty beast with it's peircing ability and spell/trap/effect immunity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoyoteStarrk1 Posted January 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 22, 2013 What about shukaku, Gedo mezo, ten tails and son goku? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CoyoteStarrk1 Posted January 26, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 26, 2013 Here are the edited versions. This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card gains 200 ATK for each Beast-Type monster in your Graveyard. When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to either the ATK or DEF (whichever is higher) of the destroyed monster in the Graveyard. Target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; until the End Phase, its ATK is halved. Once per turn, discard your entire hand to destroy all your opponent's Spell and Trap Cards on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted January 27, 2013 Report Share Posted January 27, 2013 You did a great job by creating those cards. the effects are cool and I cannot see any OCG error, BUT!!, your pics have words or parts of words in them. That's WRONG! (I'm not yelling.. I want to show you how wrong this is).For the cards 5/10 -3/10 (for the words) = 2/10For the creativity 5/10Total 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koshej Posted March 7, 2013 Report Share Posted March 7, 2013 Now these are not bad. :D Check out my PROJECT anyways: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/290372-naruto-lets-make-it-a-good-set/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stsmartt123 Posted March 24, 2013 Report Share Posted March 24, 2013 I agree the OCG is fine and if these cards didn't have words and were really I would totally use them. 6.5/10 :cool: 1/10 horrible 2/10 really bad 3/10 bad 4/10 ok 5/10 fine 6/10 good 7/10 really good 8/10 great 9/10 amazing 10/10 perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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