New set - History of the Beginning World

[Herr Kanin]

 

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[Pink]

pretty cool, 9/10 :)

[Herr Kanin]

Thanks!

[Code Y.C.M]

it looks like my New "History" type of caard that i made if you are trying to copy me it is ok but you need to give me points if u did, but if u never knew about them ok nice work anyway.

[Herr Kanin]

I didn't know that! Should I give you credit?

[shonenhikada]

ok I'm gonna critique

 

1. enlighten scroll of light,seem very underpowered. removing all star blaster monsters in the grave to add a 0 ATK monster to your hand hardly seems worth it. But never the less that's what the games about we get cards like these sometimes.

 

for this I'll give a 7.5/10. you lost 1 because of the pic and 1.5 because I really didn't like the effect.

 

2.Star wolf, not bad it would be helpful in a beast deck nice job. for that i give a 8.5/10. 1.5 was lost because of the pic looks a little lame in terms of art.

 

3. scroll of life. normal monster.because of this I'll judge on grammar than effect. you made a grammatical error it should be "combine to form" not "combine and form". you lose 1 mark for that. pic needs some work as well like a better background so you lose 1 point. 8/10

 

4.scroll of death. again used back the same story. no problem their but because of this you have the same grammatical error. so 1 mark loss. and all you did was invert the image. which to me is kinda like reusing images,so i took 1 mark of that and another for the same point about the picture. so 7/10.

 

5.scroll of water.again grammatical error,-1. pic seems rather bland.-1. 8/10.

 

6.god of scroll deeply underpowered chances of forming it are low.again the game has cards like these so no prob.ah that's about it. you just get -1 for just that. 9/10.

 

7.defense of gadget not bad can be very useful in a gadget deck. but image sucks big time. -1 for that. 9/10.

 

8.beginner of hunter. like the pic it's good. the effect also seems decent but. you have an OCG error at the end of your sentence. beginning monsters seem incorrect way try to find another way to word it, say except monsters with "beginning" in it's card name instead. 9/10

 

9.beginning tauros has the same problem as beginning hunter and pic needs some work to cartoony. 8/10

 

10.beginning swordweilder. pic is kinda hard to see and it doesn't reflect your other cards (they have color in their card art and ti does not) try to fix that. -2 for that. 8/10

 

this has been my review. average rating

 

your final rating on set 7.45/10 hope this helps

[Herr Kanin]

Mhm. I agree - but it's not easy for me to just change them - they're saved on my hard disc. Thanks for the review!

[Grayall]

I alnywaysave my best cards on yugiohcardmaker, to alway edit them. Of course, can you tell me how did you got that Gray card...

[Herr Kanin]

I Inverted them, and then I Sepia:ed them.

[Faded]

God of the Scroll needs a easier summoning condition [like fusion without poly and monsters dont have to be on the field. Plus Id give it an effect to support beginning monsters, and can utilize the rfp star wolf's.

 

EDITED.

[Herr Kanin]

Ok, thx! I also made them a little too non-perfect.

[Huntar!]

shonenhikada said everything.

[Herr Kanin]

Okay. Could you quote if referencing to another post?

[Darkhound]

nice cards and pictures. 7.45/10

[Herr Kanin]

Bump.

[cheese07]

Level 7 and 11 look like unicorns o_0 ?_?

[Herr Kanin]

Level 7 and 11 look like unicorns o_0 ?_?

I know; they're "Drunicagons". ^^;