First card.

[Marton Pass]

[Supertramp]

Lore Correction:

If this card is attacked by a monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, the attacking monster is destroyed before damage calculation.

 

The last sentence is redundant. If the other monster is destroyed before damage calculation, this card is not destroyed. I don't like that it's a "Musketeer"-Type, that's not realistic. Make it a Warrior.

But I really like the idea. It can be useful as a counterattack when you Set it and let it get attacked. But the best is that it is unattackable for all  monsters with quite low DEF, espacially if you higher its ATK somehow. Pretty cool. It would work great with "Command Knight" (if it was a Warrior-Type). It also seems balanced to me.

For your first card this is really good IMO. Well done (:

[Marton Pass]

Lore Correction:

If this card is attacked by a monster whose DEF is lower than this card's ATK, the attacking monster is destroyed before damage calculation.

 

The last sentence is redundant. If the other monster is destroyed before damage calculation, this card is not destroyed. I don't like that it's a "Musketeer"-Type, that's not realistic. Make it a Warrior.

But I really like the idea. It can be useful as a counterattack when you Set it and let it get attacked. But the best is that it is unattackable for all  monsters with quite low DEF, espacially if you higher its ATK somehow. Pretty cool. It would work great with "Command Knight" (if it was a Warrior-Type). It also seems balanced to me.

For your first card this is really good IMO. Well done (:

Thanks. I'll keep that in mind.