kevin7653 Posted January 29, 2013 Report Share Posted January 29, 2013 After two years of never logging in I'M BACK!I joined in 2010 and this is my first card I have posted since 2011.If you couldnt tell I'm a bit rusty on the card making now a days but im trying to get back into it.ANY constructive criticm or positive feedback is welcome.Please tell me what areas I can improve on.Now without further ado MY FIRST CARD IN TWO YEARS! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cartridge813 Posted January 29, 2013 Report Share Posted January 29, 2013 1) Welcome back :D glad you've returned! 2) I would look at your OCG (and grammar). i.e. "If head you life points" I think should be "If heads, you take damage", right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 29, 2013 Report Share Posted January 29, 2013 The grammar's weird. When this card destroys a monster by battle: Flip a coin. If heads, gain Life Points equal to half the destroyed monster's original ATK. If tails, your opponent takes damage equal to half the destroyed monster's original ATK. As power goes, it's not worth Summoning. It has a respectable 2600 ATK, but for 2 Tributes with no easy way to get it out. I could run Evil HERO Malicious Edge and possibly get it out for 1 Tribute, and I'd have Piercing to do extra damage for me. Or I could use Three Thousand Needles for 3000 ATK and still have a target for Horn of the Phantom Beast. This draws a couple of recent support cards, but not important ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted January 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 1) Welcome back :D glad you've returned! 2) I would look at your OCG (and grammar). i.e. "If head you life points" I think should be "If heads, you take damage", right? So what im hearing from you is that I have have bad OCG?Then again I knew that anyways :P.I bet the OCG rules have changed about 12 times since I qiut. The grammar's weird. As power goes, it's not worth Summoning. It has a respectable 2600 ATK, but for 2 Tributes with no easy way to get it out. I could run Evil HERO Malicious Edge and possibly get it out for 1 Tribute, and I'd have Piercing to do extra damage for me. Or I could use Three Thousand Needles for 3000 ATK and still have a target for Horn of the Phantom Beast. This draws a couple of recent support cards, but not important ones. I understand the OCG complaint. With the complaint about the two tributes to bust it out I can sorta understand. You also said it only has 2600 ATK but there are many ways to power it up and the effect (in my humble opinion) Can be game changing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 I mentioned one way to power it up: Horn of the Phantom Beast. There are also the Fire Formations, but since that Deck is extremely fast this card would not accelerate victory for it. There are many boosts to give it, but to effectively use them, you'd need 2 Tributes, plus this card, plus the card to give it a boost. And the effect is literally a coin flip, so you have little control over whether it is "game-changing" or not. Damage tends to do more than healing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 Good card, would definately use it in frognarchs. You need to fix up on the grammar a bit... but that's already been pointed out. Also, I'm not sure if this card fits in very well. It doesnt have that high of an attack, and when you get it out you're risking it dying, etc. etc. Theres a lot of risks that go into playing this, when you could just get out LADD, which is literally the antithesis of risk. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted January 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 I understand your concern.Thanks for the positive feedback :).As with the risking the crad being destroyed theres that risk with pretty much any card.Even summoning a card is a risk.I understand the concern with the ATK but there are MILLIONS of ways to increase it.However as it has been pointed out twice what if I upped it to 2800? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted January 30, 2013 Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 Rather than that, you'd be better off making it LV6, makes it significantly more playable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted January 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2013 oh well duh.I think I though of that but I guess I forgot :P.Well that is a great idea I will fix up the OCG and make it LV.6 There fixed it.Any better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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