New piercer single

[Veniet]

 

 

Once per turn, roll a single die twice and choose 1 of these results: If the result is between 1-3: target 1 face-up monster your opponent controls; lower its Atk and Def by 500 for each face-up LIGHT monster you control. If the result is 4 or 5; target and destroy 1 Spell/Trap card your opponent controls. if the result is 6, this card loses 500 Atk but can attack twice during the same Battle Phase. This card deals piercing damage.

 

[kevin7653]

the OCG is way off.Go back fix your capitols(thats part of OCG) and There are quite a few others that need fixing.Also on OCG does it only deal piercing damage if its a 6?If not move that bit to the front.Also with one die twice thing the OCG is off on that to.Also I dont understand the part about rolling it twice but the way the OCG is worded it sounds like you only said roll it once.So theres your OCG for you.As to the actual effect it is ok but easier to get the better boosts than the bad ones is it supposed to be way?If so you should fix it.Also for an effect like it has the ATK is probably good at 1800 but I would personnly put it at 1700 or make the effect a little less OP.Not saying the card is OP it is pretty balanced but maybe instead of reducing your opponents stats by 500 maybe 400?

 

Anyways it is a pretty good attempt and you are still fairly new. On a sacle of 100 I give it an 67/100.Despite what I have said this card is completely salvigable but you will have to put a bit of effert and thought into fixing it.