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I would suggest making your image PNG instead of JPEG because of higher resolution, cause it looks pretty bad. Anyways, Tour Guide with this card and an instant pop doens't seem like a good design to me, if it was LIGHT only monsters you needed to attach, then I wouldn't be so eh about the design. The OCG is pretty good, I don't see any problems here, but mostly because you kind of copied Nightmare Shark's text, which I wouldn't call a prolem, just very easily noticable. Anyways pretty okay card if you just change it to LIGHT instead perhaps.

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Volcashark?

 

This is monstrous. It's an out to face-up and face-down monsters, and even if Tour Guide didn't exist it still makes a 1 for 1 against pretty much every Deck. It's also a LIGHT Beast and can attack directly the turn you use its effect. Compare it to Number 17: Leviathan Dragon, who can take out monsters through battle with 2500 ATK and is considered "good". This card can take out anything and inflict enough damage to finish off an opponent who wasn't even close to dying.

 

I don't see much reason for the effect that gives it extra Materials.

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