Legend Of The End Dragon SET #1

[igorlellis0]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by the effects of "Golden Destruction Ritual". The special summon of this card cannot be negated. The ATK and DEF points of this card are equal to the number of tributes x 1000. Every time this card battles, remove from play 5 cards from both players' decks. If this card is targeted by Magic, Trap on Monster effect cards, you can tribute 1 dragon-type monster from your side of the field to negate that effect and destroy the targeting card.

[jabber2033]

Sigh...you're like the third member today that's done this.  If there's more than 2 cards; put them in the Sets/Archetypes section.

 

OGC is slightly off.  The condtion needed to activate the card is followed by a colon ( : ), the cost is followed by a semi-colon ( ; ), then you have the effect.  Also, the phrase "remove from play" has become "banish" or "banished".  

 

Interesting effects, but some are slightly Overpowered.  Love Dragon shouldn't negate the attack.  It makes it a +1 for you and steals a monster?  Why do you think Brain Control and Change of Heart were banned?

 

I also don't like the white background on Elixer either.  

 

On the Ritual Spell, remove the "remove from play 5 cards" effect.

 

EDIT: Looks like this has been moved to the right section.  Cool.

[igorlellis0]

Added 2 effects so that love dragon is less powerful: not being able to attack if the effect is used and being destroyed causing the controlled monster to be destroyed.

 

Also I know it has become "banished", but I like my cards old-fashioned. So I think it's okay.

 

The Golden Dragon is also too powerful, so I added that condition for the Ritual Summon to balance the card.

 

I'll think of something later to make the background on Elixir less flat.