card creator 123 Posted February 11, 2013 Report Share Posted February 11, 2013 please be good, this is my first set I publish. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Airride Posted February 11, 2013 Report Share Posted February 11, 2013 Megalodon is obviously supposed to be a syncrho, so change that. Additionally, it would probably be a Fish or Sea serpent, not an Aqua. It's effect is broken, Honestly. 2500 is decent, A raigeki instead of it attacking is too good, and the fact it activates not only when synchro'd, but Also Regularly special Summon Egads. Balance it. Also, It's materials should read "1 Aqua-Type Tuner + Master of Waves". Not going to fix the rest of the OCG, but it's bad. Speaking of Master of Waves, it does not exist. Fix that. Baby Seal is...Terrible. Tuners can be used the turn they're summoned anyway, So you basically strip it of vanilla support and make you pay for using it. Ewww. Make the effect worthwhile. Same complain as with Megalodon as well, in that it isn't really an aqua, but a Fish or a beast. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
card creator 123 Posted February 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2013 Megalodon is obviously supposed to be a syncrho, so change that. Additionally, it would probably be a Fish or Sea serpent, not an Aqua. It's effect is broken, Honestly. 2500 is decent, A raigeki instead of it attacking is too good, and the fact it activates not only when synchro'd, but Also Regularly special Summon Egads. Balance it. Also, It's materials should read "1 Aqua-Type Tuner + Master of Waves". Not going to fix the rest of the OCG, but it's bad. Speaking of Master of Waves, it does not exist. Fix that. Baby Seal is...Terrible. Tuners can be used the turn they're summoned anyway, So you basically strip it of vanilla support and make you pay for using it. Ewww. Make the effect worthwhile. Same complain as with Megalodon as well, in that it isn't really an aqua, but a Fish or a beast. thanks forthe advice, and that wasfunny, really i'm a noob,clearly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted February 12, 2013 Report Share Posted February 12, 2013 if you dont know how a cards text goes, you can just look at a real cards text for an example. the first card is too powerful, in my opinion you could make it like this: 1 Aqua Type Tuner + Master of waves When this card is Synchro Summoned, Destroy 1 Monster your opponent controls. this is more balanced because 1- its only when synchro summoned and 2- it only destroys 1 card. to further balance it you could add: "This card cannot attack the turn it is synchro summoned" baby seal is really bad. what you could do is: "You can pay ???? Life Points to special summon this card from your (hand/graveyard)" and then balance it with. "if this card is special summoned with this effect, banish it when it is removed from the field." similar to Quillbolt hedgehog and plaguespreader zombie. Master of waves is lv5 so you can add some ATK or DEF to match his level. the effect could go like :"Once per turn when a spell/trap card you control is destroyed, you can destroy 1 spell/trap card your opponent controls. This card gains ??? ATK for every ??? type monster in your graveyard. these are just ideas on what i would do, its still your choice. the concept is good, you just need to work on the effects :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
card creator 123 Posted February 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 12, 2013 thanks for the advice, andnow i will edit it :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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