Dremora Posted February 12, 2013 Report Share Posted February 12, 2013 Hi, well, I have lurked around the forums alot, but never really did make any cards. I was always to lazy. I finally got around to making a card and here it is. Lore: You can only control 1 "Battle Angel Fiora". For every Monster banished: this card gains 200 ATK. For every Dark-Type monster your opponent controls: this card gains 200 ATK. If this card battles a Light-Type monster: Banish this card. If this card is Banished by its own effect: the original controller of this card gains Life Points equal to half of this cards total ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
card creator 123 Posted February 12, 2013 Report Share Posted February 12, 2013 well, I think is a good card, the effect is good, the only thing I think is bad is the defence,but it complement with the effect that would help in the attack well welcome to YCM and this is a good try for the first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Loyalist Posted February 13, 2013 Report Share Posted February 13, 2013 I think for a first card you did well with the OCG. As for the card it works well against chaos decks as it can fight off both light and dark monsters also I see some effect verses lightsworns and inzektors (Or any meta/near meta dark or light deck) but as it is not very effective verses many decks and has generally low ATK/DEF it will not see much play but good attempt nonetheless. 7.5/10 for originality 6/10 for balance (As I think it is a bit weak but still better than being OP) so overall a 6.75/10 but as a first card that is quite good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dremora Posted February 14, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 14, 2013 I think for a first card you did well with the OCG. As for the card it works well against chaos decks as it can fight off both light and dark monsters also I see some effect verses lightsworns and inzektors (Or any meta/near meta dark or light deck) but as it is not very effective verses many decks and has generally low ATK/DEF it will not see much play but good attempt nonetheless. 7.5/10 for originality 6/10 for balance (As I think it is a bit weak but still better than being OP) so overall a 6.75/10 but as a first card that is quite good. Thanks for the opinion. What I was actually going for was an anti-chaos card. I was actually thinking of increasing its base ATK to 1400. I was also mainly going for a side deck style card. I figured that it was to slow of a mechanic for a lot of decks, so I went with a more situational approach. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkneptune Posted February 14, 2013 Report Share Posted February 14, 2013 Very nice first card, you did great. I love her theme and the image is awesome. The effect is cool, not too much but not too little, she can certainly be a headache in one of those long duels that sometimes happens. Me likes. id say 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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