Entropy Archetype PREVIEW

[Gredious AKA. Solomon409]

[spoiler="Lice - Herald of Entropy"]
LORE: When this card's level reaches 0, destroy this card. Once per turn, you may lower this card's level by 1 and special summon one level 4 or lower Zombie-Type monster from your hand.[/spoiler]
Essentially a summoner, this card is meant to mass summon many Zombies to your side of the field for quick synchro or Xyz summon.

[spoiler="Wright - Knight of Entropy"]
LORE: During each of your end phases, decreases the level of this card by 1. When this card's level reaches 0, destroy this card. When this card attacks another monster on your opponent's side of the field, increases this card's attack by this card's level x200[/spoiler]
A cheap beatstick, but with deadly synergy if paired correctly...

[spoiler="Unholy Cesspool of Decay"]
LORE: Once per turn, when a "Entropy" or "Decay" monster's level would be lowered, you may pay 300 life points to increases that card's level by one. Once per turn, place one "Decay Counter" on this card. When this card is removed from the field, inflict damage to your opponent's life points equal to the number of "Decay Counter"s on this card x100.[/spoiler]
This card is what holds the deck alive. Definitely the core of this deck.

[spoiler="Grenn - Champion of Decay"]
LORE: 1 Zombie-Type Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
During each of your end phases, decreases the level of this card by 1. When this card's level reaches 0, destroy this card. Once per turn, you may lower this card's level by one, and destroy one card on the field.[/spoiler]
The Champion card of this deck, its more of a "This is just getting far too silly" kinda card. Combined with the spell card, and you pretty much can destroy anything that is thrown your way.

So, any comments?

[magemeek22]

THIS IS A FANTASTIC CONCEPT. ENTROPY. I AM SO JEALOUS. WHY HAS NO ONE...

 

No, seriously, great originality in thought and really good concept. It essentially turns the monsters level into counters - like a redone version of fortune ladies but with an entirely different theme. However, with praise comes criticism: Foremost, I feel that the field spell is slightly OP; it shouldn't really allow your monsters to gain a level every time they lose one since that defeats the purpose of Entropy. My recommendation is that you omit the part about paying 100 life points to add a level to your monster and just leave the part about adding Decay Tokens each time your monster's decrease in level. It would be something like this:

"Each time a 'Entropy' or 'Decay' monster's level decreases by 1, add 1 Decay Token onto this card. When this card leaves the field, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Decay Tokens on this card X200."

That'll make it a great burn card!

 

And finally, reread the "Wright" card- is that a typo? 200 extra levels? That's not possible so...

[Darkneptune]

Its a really interesting concept, very original and very cool.

 

what i think is, you can have the field spell make level reduction optional, so the monsters last longer. also, you dont place tokens on cards, you place counters. tokens are low level monsters you summon to the field. although, if you want to make the field spell summon tokens, its completely viable and allows for strategy and combos.

 

also, you should give Lice a level limit. as he is he can summon any level zombie, which makes him a bit too strong, at least in my opinion. i think a level 4 or lower zombie is ok, specially since Wright is level 4.

 

what i see is, you can place the field spell first, and if its effect makes level reduction optional, you dont have to lower Lice's level to special summon Wright. then synchro summon for Grenn. By the way, i LOVE the image you used for Grenn. im not a big fan of zombies, but his image just looks awesome. very good choice. :D

[Gredious AKA. Solomon409]

Thanks for the constructive feedback guys :D

@Magemeek22: You might have read the last part wrong. What i meant was you increase it's attack by its level x200. I should include lore later.
I refuse to remove the part about raising the level by one, because that was it's role. I can try to nerf the ability though.

@Darkneptue: derp on me about the tokens :D I always mix it up with counters. And I forgot to add that clause to Lice, I agree it is way too OP. I will also take your comment regarding the Spell card into changing it's effect.

EDIT- Made the changed, and added spoiler tags so it wouldn't take up so much space. And I've added lore to make it easier to read.

[drcrisis]

Its like venoms + somehow reversed fortune ladies. Pretty cool I guess...

 

But its a card set and not singles so I'm gun be butthurt. Move this to sets please

 

I like it, its pretty cool, but not enough cards, and the cesspool is just downright stupid. Paying lifepoints to keep your own cards? So you have to kill yourself to even PLAY the deck? Nobody would use it as no cards stay on the field for 4-5 turns straight.

 

And the synchro is just going to be used as some sort of plaguespreader target or turbo card in Zombies because you can reduce its level and then just XYZ with it for like big-eye real fast... sounds dumb.

[Gredious AKA. Solomon409]

@drcris Note that this is only a PREVIEW, i'm still working on the other cards of the sets. And since the Card set section is reserved for Finished Sets, I felt it wouldn't be appropriate to post it there.