Fishy Xyz

[ledtitus]

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No Reply? Why? Has i made something really that bad?

[ledtitus]

Bump.

[Sora1499]

This guy would go pretty well with bahamut shark. Being a pseudo-utopia with more applications is also nice. The only thing I dislike about it is that it's an OTK machine due to the first effect. I'd change it to "Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up rank 3 or lower Xyz monster you control; that target can attack your opponent directly during each battle phase this turn. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn you used this effect." After that, it should be fine.

[ledtitus]

This guy would go pretty well with bahamut shark. Being a pseudo-utopia with more applications is also nice. The only thing I dislike about it is that it's an OTK machine due to the first effect. I'd change it to "Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up rank 3 or lower Xyz monster you control; that target can attack your opponent directly during each battle phase this turn. This card cannot declare an attack during the turn you used this effect." After that, it should be fine.

Won't that slow the card, as for targeting 1, should it not be up to a certain number-other than one-or would i just increase it's material requirements to 3 to fit the constrains.

[Sora1499]

Won't that slow the card, as for targeting 1, should it not be up to a certain number-other than one-or would i just increase it's material requirements to 3 to fit the constrains.

It would make it slower, but as it is, it has the potential to be extremely broken..  Unrestricted direct attacking with big monsters is bad design, in theory and in practice.  The fixes I suggested are necessary.