[Machine-type Monster]: Corrupt Data Fighter

[Neo-Shinryu]

Well, this is my first attempt at making a card, and for it I wanted to try out something a bit standard though with enough of an interesting ability to make it semi-notable. Essentially, I just want to start off a bit easy rather than trying to make something insane.

 

 

 

Effect:

When a Machine-type monster other than this one is Summoned to the field, place 1 Spell Counter on this monster (max 1). You can remove 1 Spell Counter from this monster to move any Machine-type monster with 1500 ATK or less in your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Any thoughts of feedback on this would be appreciated. I really want to know how I can improve this card and what potential faults are in it.

 

Update: Changed the monster a bit. Re-arranged his effect to make it a bit more useful/less of a hassle to build up. It is primarily geared towards Machine-themed decks with his current ability.

[T3RA PROWL3R]

There are a couple extremely minor OCG errors, but that's fine, especially for your first.

 

I could imagine this effect would be really tough to pull off. I would suggest either lowering the cost or making the effect do a bit more. A simple banish of a card that you have no idea what it is would hardly get you anywhere in a duel.

[Neo-Shinryu]

True, now that I think on it his effect could be a bit more worth-while. I'll probably get to work on changing the effect overall of it, and maybe the cost of spell counters to use it.

 

Edit: Updated him a bit. Trying to make his effect a bit better, though at the same time not exactly to the point where one can abuse it.