First Attempt: Custom Card

[VKAllen]

Hello. This is my first attempt in making a custom card, I will be open to feedback, reviews and criticism.

 

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"Azure Knight - Balmung"

 

Warrior/Effect

 

Once per turn: If 'Azure Knight - Kite' and 'Azure Knight - Orca' is on your side of the field, increase this card's ATK by 900 until the End Phase, and if you do; this card cannot attack in your next Battle Phase.

 

EDIT:

 

Card was added more information. Replaced 'Or' to 'And'.

 

Brief Explanation: This card can gain 900 ATK if Azure Knight - Kite and Azure Knight - Orca is summoned on your side of the field. However, it can't attack on your next Battle Phase.

[NDX77]

I was going to say Op'd but i like how you keep it balanced in making it so that you are unable to attack in your battle phase. However, if the player waits 2 turns to increase this card's attack by 1800 it's going to have 3800 attack which is too strong for a level 4 card. So i suggest :

Decrease the original attack of this card or:

Decrease the attack the effect gives.

But overall a pretty good card

[VKAllen]

I was going to say Op'd but i like how you keep it balanced in making it so that you are unable to attack in your battle phase. However, if the player waits 2 turns to increase this card's attack by 1800 it's going to have 3800 attack which is too strong for a level 4 card. So i suggest :

Decrease the original attack of this card or:

Decrease the attack the effect gives.

But overall a pretty good card

Shoot, I accidentally placed 'Or' instead of 'And'. Your suggestion was initially accounted for already, but it seems that my eye failed to catch that mistake. I thank your review, however. An edited image for this card will be underway.

[Goalmaster]

This card is not bad at all for a new member but try to decrease the ATK that the effect gives or change the origi,al ATK just like he said

[VKAllen]

Bump, I still would like some critics on the card.