youwitheface Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Probably spent more time on this than I should have... Any constructive criticism is greatly accepted! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Probably spent more time on this than I should have... Any constructive criticism is greatly accepted! you spend more time on it than you should have? Hahaha, what!? It's one effect, nothing else. It's extreamly broken, it can gain up to 6300 ATK if you filled the whole field with cards, way too much for this, combo with cards that summon tokens, both to your side of the field, and Ojama Trio that summon to your opponents side to fill it up with cards. It's easy to summon as well, an other target for Tour Guide. Pretty much not a well designed card at all. EDIT: Also, the OCG is not the greatest, I'll fix it a bit: This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
youwitheface Posted February 27, 2013 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Woah... I never grew up with summon tokens or Ojama Trio. I haven't played yugioh since... the dark ages, and when I said I spent more time than I should have, I was referring to the fact that I started this years ago on a different account and hasn't been touched until now. Anyway, thanks for the quick critique! I hope this one is at least a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted February 27, 2013 Report Share Posted February 27, 2013 Woah... I never grew up with summon tokens or Ojama Trio. I haven't played yugioh since... the dark ages, and when I said I spent more time than I should have, I was referring to the fact that I started this years ago on a different account and hasn't been touched until now. Anyway, thanks for the quick critique! I hope this one is at least a little better. ...You completly changed the effect. The effect is also weirdly written. When does it destroy all Trap Cards? When it's summoned, when one is activated? You need this infomation, otherwise I got no idea when. Your OCG is also pretty bad, as "play" is not a word, it should be activate instead. The card is not broken I would say, it's a Jinzo that's a lower level with less ATK basicly, it can easily be taken out. Now, if you're getting into YGO, I suggest you don't post in RC right now, as this section is focused on knowing the current game, and what might break this card. But right now, simply fix some of the OCG (if you need help, go look in "About OCG", that should help you greatly). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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