silence.renegade Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 This is my second card that I have made. Please can you help me improve this thanks. Silence RENEGADE.Effect - To summon this monster you do not tribute any monster. Instead you lose life points equal to the ATK points of all face-up monsters on the field. For every 1000 life points lost in this way, this card gains 1000 ATK and you must pay 500 life points during each battle phase.Intelligent criticism only please. I am the maker of the image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Faded Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 6/10-picture quality is poor- effect is different Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Your grammar sucks, really... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon God Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 need better pic.some ocg errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 This card would be just about perfect if you improved on the overall quality and uniqueness of the card image and the effects OCG, still great effort, well done. 77.7/10.2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Apocolypse Posted March 12, 2008 Report Share Posted March 12, 2008 Don't be discouraged, time will bring improvment. This card still needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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