Elven Deck I'm working on Tell me if it needs to be edited

[Cirlex]

So guys I have 5 cards and I need your opinion and help if I should edit them or not.

 

[Spoiler=Dark Elf Fairy]

 

 

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[Spoiler=Dark Elves Sisters + Ritual]

 

 

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[Spoiler=Elven Archer + Lightstar Elven Dragon]

 

 

 

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That's it for now guys please tell me on how I should improve these cards and tell me suggestions for other cards!

 

 

~Aragorn

 

AKA TheAragorn

[Pdogwang]

Their Effects arent that great except for LightStar Elven Dragon you need to balence his effect by also paying 1000 lifepoints

[Cirlex]

Their Effects arent that great except for LightStar Elven Dragon you need to balence his effect by also paying 1000 lifepoints

 

Thanks for that,and yeah I lowered the effect to make it more balanced.

[fire5038]

I see a minor text error Dark Elf Fairy, it doesn't say when you activate the effect, is it when you summon it or is it once per turn? I would also add "until you opponent's next End Phase". Also, on Elven Archer, another minor text error, you should probably say "deals an extra 200 damage to your opponent's LP". Thats pretty much all I saw. These are great cards though.

[Cirlex]

I see a minor text error Dark Elf Fairy, it doesn't say when you activate the effect, is it when you summon it or is it once per turn? I would also add "until you opponent's next End Phase". Also, on Elven Archer, another minor text error, you should probably say "deals an extra 200 damage to your opponent's LP". Thats pretty much all I saw. These are great cards though.

 

 

Thanks I'll get working on the errors ASAP!

[Cirlex]

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