new balanced card

[Riadokun]

i want your opinion about , logic , silly or good :)

 

guys this is my first participation here . just for beginning

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[Zazubat]

Well it would be great if you finished your effect, cause it just kind of stops in the middle of

I would suggest you don't make it a Counter as it doens't respond to anything, if you want to make it something make it a quick-play instead. It's a quire powerful card though, not only outclasses it Shrink, it also doesn't target and it doens't use it's original ATK (meaning that cards with that have their ATK already lowered will be affacted, though it is somewhat balanced since cards with ? won't go to it's original ATK). I really would like to know what the second effect was suppose to say here. Your OCG is also pretty bad, I would suggest looking into the "About OCG" thread on the forum

[Miror B]

Alright first, the language is all wrong. Even without problem solving card text. I'm sorry if English isn't your first language and this offends you, but cards should be understood without confusion. In fact I actually thought it was a permanent change because you ended your sentence prematurely :/

 

Secondly, this is outclassed by Shrink. Being a trap it has to be set first, but Shrink you can either set or just drop right away. Even if it's all, it's lacking in flexibility. In short, it's not good.

 

Thirdly, Counter Traps are usually Counter Traps because they respond to something (in other words, they "counter" something). It's a good rule of thumb to follow for counter traps.

 

And for proper language:

 

Pay 1000 Life Points; Halve the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until the End Phase.

 

If you want a link to the PSCT rules I'll find it for you, just pm me.

[Zazubat]

Alright first, the language is all wrong. Even without problem solving card text. I'm sorry if English isn't your first language and this offends you, but cards should be understood without confusion. In fact I actually thought it was a permanent change because you ended your sentence prematurely :/

 

Secondly, this is outclassed by Shrink. Being a trap it has to be set first, but Shrink you can either set or just drop right away. Even if it's all, it's lacking in flexibility. In short, it's not good.

 

Thirdly, Counter Traps are usually Counter Traps because they respond to something (in other words, they "counter" something). It's a good rule of thumb to follow for counter traps.

 

And for proper language:

 

Pay 1000 Life Points; Halve the ATK of all monsters your opponent controls until the End Phase.

 

If you want a link to the PSCT rules I'll find it for you, just pm me.

you don't capitalize the word after the semi-colon unless it's an OCG word that is always capialized such as Special Summon or Deck.