Machine Guardian and Salvage

[BleedingKnees]

These are my first cards, hope there are no errors or aren't OPed. Images are from jazin kay's photo-bucket and please tell me what you think.

 

 

Lore: 1 tuner monster + 1 or more non-tuner monsters

If this card is destroyed as a result of battle, special summon this card from the graveyard to your side of the field and treat it as a "union monster". (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)

 

 

Lore: Only activate this card if you take battle damage. Special Summon one Lvl 4 or lower monster from your graveyard to your side of the field.

[DL]

Hmm

 

For the first one, maybe you were going for something like

 

"If this card is destroyed as a result of battle: You can equip this card to 1 monster you control as a Union monster. (A monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, this card is destroyed instead.)"?

Because how you worded it, it gets Union-monster status, but it comes back as a monster, so it's pretty much invincible by battle.

 

 

I like the second one though, short and simple ;D

 

 

Though there already is a card called salvage, but I can see that being part of the actual game :3

[Veniet]

  Hey, I overall like the Synchro, but like DL said, I think you should reword it to say you can equip it to a face-up monster you control. You can possibly add an unequip effect as well, just to give it extra flavor, uniqueness.

 This is just an unrelated idea, but you can possibly grow a little set based around this guy.

 

 About Salvage; Yeah, there's a WATER based spell called Salvage, so I'd just advise a name-change. These aren't bad for first attempts; Definately better than some first-timers. Keep working, sir.