Here Is my new deck

[Goalmaster]

Thx for helping me building my deck and here it is [attachment=36641:Deck.png]

[Iam Isthename]

I think you need some Heart of the Underdog

[T3RA PROWL3R]

-3 Sakuretsu

-3 Blackland

-3 Dark Blade

-3 Hunter Dragon

-5 Exodia pieces (You have no reliable way to draw them, and they will dead draw most of the time when you can get something useful

 

+2 D-Pris

+1 Judgment

+3 Alexandrite (LIGHT fuel for BLS, better beater)

+1 BLS (You've got all the stuff for it)

+1 Foolish

+2 MST

+2 Sarc

+1 Dragon Mirror

+1 Wyvern

+1 Warning

+2 Swing or Hand Destruction if dead drawing happens with the bigger monsters.

 

Also, in your extra, you don't need more than 2 each of the Fusion monsters. FHD doesn't even need to be at 2.

[ihop]

-3 Sakuretsu

-3 Blackland

-3 Dark Blade

-3 Hunter Dragon

-5 Exodia pieces (You have no reliable way to draw them, and they will dead draw most of the time when you can get something useful

 

+2 Dimensional Prison

+1 Solemn Judgment

+3 Alexandrite (LIGHT fuel for BLS, better beater)

+1 Black Luster Soldier - Envoy of the Beginning (You've got all the stuff for it)

+1 Foolish Burial

+2 Mystical Space Typhoon

+2 Gold Sarcophagus

+1 Dragon Mirror

+1 Red-Eyes? Wyvern 

+1 Solemn Warning

+2 Swing of Memories or Hand Destruction if dead drawing happens with the bigger monsters.

 

Also, in your extra, you don't need more than 2 each of the Fusion monsters. FHD doesn't even need to be at 2.

 

You could at least bother giving the full names for cards, he's clearly not the most experienced duelist.