GrimJr1393 Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 I have made my first set of cards called: Destiny Dragons! When this card is summoned successfully, you may add one 'Destiny Dragon' card from your deck or graveyard to your hand. When this card is successfully summoned, you can destroy any number of spells and traps equal to the number of 'Destiny Dragon' cards on the field including this card. When this card is successfully summoned, you can special summon a 'Destiny Dragon' card from your hand. Once per turn, you can change this card to Defense Position. When this card is successfully summoned, your opponent loses 1000 Life Points. This card gains 500 Attack Points for each 'Destiny Dragon' card on the field including this card. How are they? This are my very first cards and I hoped they turned out great :P I will also take any suggestions given :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmack89 Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 I think that your cards look great, but man I would hate to go up against a deck with these guys in it they are way to strong. Also here's just a thought it seems like these guys would be elemental dragons. So you left out light and dark attributes so dark and light could be the destiny dragons. I think that the art looks really sweet on the cards, but some of the monsters like fire has to high defense and waters attack and defense ratio is to high to be realistic, plus they have great effects so drop your defense on the fire, and lower both attack and defense of water to balance the card out. Also with wind if he is going to be that strong plus have that effect h should have some other effect to balance him out as well like it cannot be special summoned, or it can only be special summoned by removing from play two monster with destiny (elemental however you want to phrase it) dragon in there name. These are my thoughts hope they help very nice job you put a lot of detail and thought into these cards nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 I think that your cards look great, but man I would hate to go up against a deck with these guys in it they are way to strong. Also here's just a thought it seems like these guys would be elemental dragons. So you left out light and dark attributes so dark and light could be the destiny dragons. I think that the art looks really sweet on the cards, but some of the monsters like fire has to high defense and waters attack and defense ratio is to high to be realistic, plus they have great effects so drop your defense on the fire, and lower both attack and defense of water to balance the card out. Also with wind if he is going to be that strong plus have that effect h should have some other effect to balance him out as well like it cannot be special summoned, or it can only be special summoned by removing from play two monster with destiny (elemental however you want to phrase it) dragon in there name. These are my thoughts hope they help very nice job you put a lot of detail and thought into these cards nice job. Thank you for the advice :P ... I will change them in a secSorry for Realistic errors, I am very new to card making XD Are these a bit better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dmack89 Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 I think that they are much better. These cards would make a really awesome deck.... I would defiantly play with it, and I believe it would be one of the best. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
agentsauce Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 Destiny Dragon-wind should be nerfed. Majorly. Mausoleum of the emperor = pay 2000 life points, opponent loses 1000 life points and you have a 3500 beat stick. At least make his base attack 2000, or 2500. And change it to "Except this card.". Otherwise, I like it! Add some more support, maybe some spells, a trap or two, and you have a fully-fledged archtype that would be fun to play as! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 Thanks you all for replying! By the way 'agentsauce' I will change Wind in a bit :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 18, 2013 Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 i would be able to tell you more if my computer wouldn't block thimages. But from what i saw of the effects, they seem pretty good. but as i could not see the card i don't know the attack and defences of them all. but i do like the effects Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 Fire: Atk- 1700, Def- 1500 Water: Atk- 2400, Def- 2000 Wind: Atk- 2700, Def- 3000 Earth: Atk- 1000, Def- 2000 Hope that helped ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 19, 2013 Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 a possible idea is to go more in depth with the effects. here are a couple of the ones i did for my Divine deck Seare, Divine Beast-Mistress: 1 "Divine" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. Once per turn you can banish 1 "Divine" monster from your graveyard to double this card's ATK. If yo do so, this card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 Beast Token (Beast-type, Earth, ATk/1600, DEF/1300) in face up defence position Or Drail, Divine Executioner: You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control a "Divine" monster. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, it is destroyed on the second End Phase after it was summoned. When this card leaves the field, add one "Divine" monster to your hand from your deck. The deck is then shuffled Those are just a couple. they arent written, they are actually.... created? Imagaged? i dont know how to put that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 19, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 19, 2013 a possible idea is to go more in depth with the effects. here are a couple of the ones i did for my Divine deck Seare, Divine Beast-Mistress: 1 "Divine" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. Once per turn you can banish 1 "Divine" monster from your graveyard to double this card's ATK. If yo do so, this card cannot attack your opponent directly. When this card is destroyed and sent to the graveyard, Special Summon 1 Beast Token (Beast-type, Earth, ATk/1600, DEF/1300) in face up defence position Or Drail, Divine Executioner: You can Special Summon this card from your hand if you control a "Divine" monster. If this card is Special Summoned in this way, it is destroyed on the second End Phase after it was summoned. When this card leaves the field, add one "Divine" monster to your hand from your deck. The deck is then shuffled Those are just a couple. they arent written, they are actually.... created? Imagaged? i dont know how to put that These seem like interesting ideas, though if I couple one I don't want to be sued for plagiarizing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 I will post the rest of the Set in a new Topic by the end of the week, if I get more time ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 20, 2013 Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 i'll definitely take a look at them. it seems to me a lot of people on this site( not singling out anyone and not talking about you) just slap stuff on a card and give a few cards the same title and call it a deck. but decks take time to make. ive been constantly editing my Divines for the past week or so. and i am still mssing about 6 cards before i can fimish the main deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 i'll definitely take a look at them. it seems to me a lot of people on this site( not singling out anyone and not talking about you) just slap stuff on a card and give a few cards the same title and call it a deck. but decks take time to make. ive been constantly editing my Divines for the past week or so. and i am still mssing about 6 cards before i can fimish the main deck Ohh yeah, I wasn't planning on finishing a whole deck anytime soon, good cards take time and patience to make... Which I am willing to sacrifice to make these cards :P... I'd like to see your Divines btw ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 20, 2013 Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 sure, i cant post the link n here or ill get a warning, but ill post them in a new topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 20, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 sure, i cant post the link n here or ill get a warning, but ill post them in a new topic Ok then :P... Thank you :D ^_^ I am also accepting ideas for more cards in this Set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 20, 2013 Report Share Posted March 20, 2013 Heres an idea- Destiny Dragon- Spirit Level 8 Light Dragon EFF: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by banishing from your Graveyard "Destiny Dragon- Fire", "Destiny Dragon- Earth", "Destiny Dragon- Water" and "Destiny Dragon- Wind". When this card is Special Summoned successfully, discard your entire hand, destrpy all cards on the field except for this card and inflict Direct Damage to your opponents Life Points equal to the number of cards destroyed x300. This card cannot attack the turn it is Special Summoned. ATk/ 2700 DEF/ 2800 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 21, 2013 Report Share Posted March 21, 2013 my divines are up on this forum if you wanna check em out full deck list Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 22, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 22, 2013 I like your suggestions, though I would probably rename it to "Destiny Dragon - Light" since I was going to make a Light one that is strong! And I will check in a sec! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 23, 2013 Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 unfortunately, as soon as they went up, they got locked. sooo if youve got a comment on them just pm me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 unfortunately, as soon as they went up, they got locked. sooo if youve got a comment on them just pm me I noticed that, why did it get locked? By the way I am almost finished with Destiny Dragon - Dark for this set! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 23, 2013 Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 i dont know why it got locked... i posted it and next time i went back, it was locked. and if i were you i would stick with spirit for that one because there are 5 elements- fire, water, earth and air you already have, and then spirit is the 5th... course spirit is rather rare. i personally am an earth.. which kinda surprised me. thought i would be a water [attachment=36873:Ice.jpg] ooohhh i just got an idea- sacred dragons... using the elements... npt trying to knock yours off but, here is one PRetty sick right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 i dont know why it got locked... i posted it and next time i went back, it was locked. and if i were you i would stick with spirit for that one because there are 5 elements- fire, water, earth and air you already have, and then spirit is the 5th... course spirit is rather rare. i personally am an earth.. which kinda surprised me. thought i would be a water Ice.jpg ooohhh i just got an idea- sacred dragons... using the elements... npt trying to knock yours off but, here is one PRetty sick right? Yes that looks awesome XD, I already had one guy knock off my cards :/ and that was not cool at all Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 23, 2013 Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 Please dont telll me he literally took the names and jusst changed the picures... no ive had this for a little while, i was thinking about it in the middle of divines.. byt the way, what did you think of them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrimJr1393 Posted March 23, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 Please dont telll me he literally took the names and jusst changed the picures... no ive had this for a little while, i was thinking about it in the middle of divines.. byt the way, what did you think of them? No he took the pictures, changed the name to Dragonix(Something like that) and I don't know if he really changed the effects :l ... But he like posted them a day or so after I posted my cards!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 23, 2013 Report Share Posted March 23, 2013 man, thats low... that is just low... they made this site so you could be crative.... not steal ideas. the first contest i held, the dragon king one that fell through, i had one guy post "ultimate dragon king" with buster bladers effect... come on man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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