Goalmaster Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 This is my first XYZ Card:+changings [attachment=36768:198458 (2).jpg] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anvanaar Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 You should really try and actually show us an image. ^-^ Greets, Anvanaar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Goalmaster Posted March 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 You should really try and actually show us an image. ^-^ Greets, Anvanaar there was a little mistake in uploading Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 You should really try and actually show us an image. ^-^ Greets, Anvanaar I see an image. And as for the card, the general OCG is off. For a start, your punctuation is wrong. Secondly, the wording could be much cleaner. Here is my fix: 2 Level 4 Dragon-Type monsters Once per turn; you can detach an Xyz material from this card; negate the effects of all cards your opponent controls and gain 200 Life Points for each. As for the effect, in it's current state, your opponent's cards are negated indefinitely. That is too much. It's also a 3000 ATK rank 4, which is mental. At least make it need 3 materials. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 I agree with Plainview, and if I might, i would suggest rasing the rank to at least Rank 6. just my opinion, take it as you will, but 3000 attack and 2500 defence? seems a little over powere for 2 level 4 monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bleaknight Posted March 17, 2013 Report Share Posted March 17, 2013 That's overpowered even as is, for 3 Level 4 Dragons... see Gagagigo the Risen, an effect 3 Level 4 Xyz with 2950 ATK. This card has 50 more ATK and a broken effect yet it requires Dragons. Needs heavy nerfing. Negating all of your opponent's cards until the EP? Come on. At the very least make it detach all materials for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ZeRainbowDash Posted March 18, 2013 Report Share Posted March 18, 2013 that's true. correct me if i'm wrong, but gagagigo the risen has no effect, right? i may be wrong but thats what i recall and i can't check the wikis because im on a school computer and it blocks them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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