My First Set: Marvel Movie

[looiting]

This is my first set : Marvel Movie cards.
 
I'm a new newbie here, please comment so I can improve my cards.
 
I will make more cards later.

[spoiler=Spider-Man 1,2,3]





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[spoiler=New Goblin Effect]
[This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by remove from play 1 "Norman Osborn, The Green Goblin" from your graveyard. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all trap cards cannot be activated. The effect of all face-up trap cards are negated.][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Venom Effect]
"Eddie Brock" + "Symbiote"
[When this card is sent to the graveyard, it can be treated as a equip card and equip to 1 of your monster. Increase the ATK and DEF of that monster by 500. Then, special summon 1 "Symbiote" from your deck to the field in face-down position.][/spoiler]
[spoiler=The Amazing Spider-Man]


[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Amazing Spider-Man Effect]
[This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by tribute 1 "Amazing Peter Parker".As long as this card remains face-up on the field, your opponent cannot use monsters with "Spider-Man" or "Peter Parker" on their names.][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Avengers Heroes]


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[spoiler=Hulk Effect]
[This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be summoned by tribute 1 "Dr.Bruce Banner" and 1 monster (LV5 or up). As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK amd DEF of all of your Avenger-Type monster on the field by 300. ][/spoiler]
[spoiler=Dr.Bruce Banner Effect]
[When this card is summoned (including special summon), you can search your deck for 1 "Hulk" and put it to your hand. If this card is destroyed, you can pay 1000 life points to special summon it from your graveyard to the field during your next turn.][/spoiler]

[Xi-1]

An interesting take. Please see my comments about custom subtypes and established Archetypes. I note that on some cards you have the character's full name. This is unnecssary as long as you include something to differentiate between similar-named characters. I know I included full names on my Avengers cards -- it's not really required, and it takes more text to make the card a target on another card.

 

In my opinion everyone else is either stronger or faster than Spider-Man, so his cards should really be the weakest, offensively. In particular, both Venom and Lizard are stronger and faster than Spider-Man. Even so, he is beyond peak-human, as I said in your tes thread. Adjusting the ATK and DEF on each card to balance them against their effects should give you good play.

 

The only real difference between "Peter Parker" and "Spider-Man" is whether or not he's wearing his webshooters, since he cannot turn his powers on or off. The Maguire version, however, doesn't even have webshooters, wheras the Garfield version does, but he's a brand-new novice as a hero in the movie, and his inexperience shows. You could use Counters to mark if his webbing might run out.

 

When the text on a card becomes small enough, be sure to post it below the card so we can read it and suppply good feedback.

 

When you choose pictures, you can also crop them to minimize distortion. Sometimes the movies have a good, dynamic look, however often the comics are better if only by a bit. They also give you much more with which to work.

 

A good start, and good luck with the rest.

[looiting]

An interesting take. Please see my comments about custom subtypes and established Archetypes. I note that on some cards you have the character's full name. This is unnecssary as long as you include something to differentiate between similar-named characters. I know I included full names on my Avengers cards -- it's not really required, and it takes more text to make the card a target on another card.
 
In my opinion everyone else is either stronger or faster than Spider-Man, so his cards should really be the weakest, offensively. In particular, both Venom and Lizard are stronger and faster than Spider-Man. Even so, he is beyond peak-human, as I said in your tes thread. Adjusting the ATK and DEF on each card to balance them against their effects should give you good play.
 
The only real difference between "Peter Parker" and "Spider-Man" is whether or not he's wearing his webshooters, since he cannot turn his powers on or off. The Maguire version, however, doesn't even have webshooters, wheras the Garfield version does, but he's a brand-new novice as a hero in the movie, and his inexperience shows. You could use Counters to mark if his webbing might run out.
 
When the text on a card becomes small enough, be sure to post it below the card so we can read it and suppply good feedback.
 
When you choose pictures, you can also crop them to minimize distortion. Sometimes the movies have a good, dynamic look, however often the comics are better if only by a bit. They also give you much more with which to work.
 
A good start, and good luck with the rest.

Thanks, but I have some questions to ask:
1.I don't very understand about custom subtypes and established Archetypes. Can you explain more?

2.Should I remove the monster card's real name?

3.Should I remove cards like "Peter Parker"?

4.How to use a SHOW button?

5.What software did you use to crop picture to minimize distortion?

[Xi-1]

1. Custom subtypes are the ones like 'Hero' and 'Villain' which you have used. They do not have a true relationship with cards of other subtypes or archetypes because other cards have not been made to target them specifically. Established Archetypes are the ones commonly used on Yu-Gi-Oh cards. You can reference the Yugico cardmaker if you want to see them all, and a wiki would probably he handy to tell what each does, as I do not know this myself -- for example, I've no idea why someone would want to have a Gemini Monster rather than a full-on Effect Monster. There are also Toons and Spirits in that type set. The main Archetype is the one that Warrior, Spellcaster, Rock, etc. goes under.

 

2. It's up to you what you want to do with the name, however if you intend on making other cards that target these cards, you may decide to toss out the real name just to make the text in the Description field short enough to fit on the card without being shrunk.

 

3. If there is a big enough difference between the Secret Identity and the Cape/Marvel version, you might decide to keep the Secret Identity version. If you borrow from early, unpowered versions of the Secret Identity character, you might be able to use them as Tuner Monsters or similar, if you are confident about using a Synchro Deck (I'm not, so I made a Neophyte subtype, plus my monsters use Contact Fusion, so I don't need Tuners and Synchros).

 

4. To use a spoiler, use the below tags, however remember to use square brackets [ ] instead of round brackets ( ).

(spoiler=Fake Monster Section)(seriesofcardimages)(/spoiler)

 

5. I just use MS Paint. Photoshop and GIMP should also work, if you know how to use either (I don't). Photobucket also lets you edit images you upload to it.

 

Hopefully this helps you out.

[looiting]

Thanks, it helps me a lot.

[spoiler=Marvel][avengers][/spoiler]

[epicmemesbro]

You should make a Deadpool one next like I did :D

[looiting]

I will make a Deadpool which appear in X-Men Origins:Wolverine. XD

[Xi-1]

Is something supposed to appear in your spoiler, or are you just testing? I guess that's my fault a little, at least, since I just put 'seriesofimages' in brackets without thinking you'd transpose the square brackets there too. It was just a placeholder. That's just where you put your cards. If they appear as images, the brackets don't appear at all.