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First card of mine to be posted. Took awhile to try and hammer out the appropriate wording. Comments, rating, thoughts in general?

 

*Pic by EquesFormido on deviantart*

 

 

Effect:

 

"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Your oppenent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. If this card is targeted for an attack, your oppenent does not take battle damage. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked, place 1 Soul Counter on this card and reduce this card's attack by the original attack of the attacking monster."

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First card of mine to be posted. Took awhile to try and hammer out the appropriate wording. Comments, rating, thoughts in general?

 

*Pic by EquesFormido on deviantart*

 

 

Effect:

 

"1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters
Your oppenent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. If this card is targeted for an attack, your oppenent does not take battle damage. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked, place 1 Soul Counter on this card and reduce this card's attack by the original attack of the attacking monster."

 

Your opponent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. If this card is targeted for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked before the damage step, place 1 Soul Counter on this card then reduce this card's ATK by the original ATK of the attacking monster."

 

A peace loving hippie sort of dragon?

 

Level 8 Genic synchro dragon

 

Back in the day this card would be annoying but now in the current meta everything is destroyed or bounced making this card rather pointless to use.

 

If this card is targeted for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage.

 

What is with this part?, shouldn't be: If this card targets your opponent monster for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage.

 

3000 ATK for something like this is pointless and not worth the time and materials to make it.

 

Should be 4000 ATK and 2500 DEF with: Your opponent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. Your opponent takes no battle damage from this card. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked before the damage step, place 1 Soul Counter on this card then reduce this card's ATK by the original ATK of the attacking monster.

 

Pretty fair and balance if not UP'ed 

 

At the moment with it's original effect and stats, the only use for this card is to have stardust on the field with it causing a trollololol lockdown.

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Your opponent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. If this card is targeted for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked before the damage step, place 1 Soul Counter on this card then reduce this card's ATK by the original ATK of the attacking monster."

 

A peace loving hippie sort of dragon?

 

Level 8 Genic synchro dragon

 

Back in the day this card would be annoying but now in the current meta everything is destroyed or bounced making this card rather pointless to use.

 

If this card is targeted for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage.

 

What is with this part?, shouldn't be: If this card targets your opponent monster for an attack, your opponent does not take battle damage.

 

3000 ATK for something like this is pointless and not worth the time and materials to make it.

 

Should be 4000 ATK and 2500 DEF with: Your opponent can not target any monster you control, except "Silver Soul Dragon", for an attack. Your opponent takes no battle damage from this card. This monster can not be destroyed by battle. Whenever this card is attacked before the damage step, place 1 Soul Counter on this card then reduce this card's ATK by the original ATK of the attacking monster.

 

Pretty fair and balance if not UP'ed 

 

At the moment with it's original effect and stats, the only use for this card is to have stardust on the field with it causing a trollololol lockdown.

Thanks for the feedback

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