Revision Challenge: Card 3 (Monha, Fate Decider/Decider of Faith)

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Original Lore:  

3 Level 3 Fiend Monsters.
Once this card has attacked and destroyed a monster, you can you can detach 1 Xyz Meterial and decide if the destroyed monster goes your opponents Graveyard, Bannished Zone, Deck (Shuffle deck) or hand.

Fixed Lore:

3 Level 3 Fiend-Type monsters
When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add that card to your opponent's hand, banish it, shuffle it into the Deck, or send it to their Graveyard.

 

My Thoughts: Wow, the OCG is really bad in this one, I spelled many words wrong, and it's really badly written, so much that it's hard for me to fix it even. The newer card is kind of like it, but more useful as it isn't a 3-mat Fiend-Type.

 

New Card:

New Lore:

2 Level 4 monsters
When this card destroys a monster by battle: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; add that card to it’s owners hand, banish it or shuffle it into the Deck, instead of sending it to the Graveyard, and if you do, this card gains 200 ATK and DEF.