First Card. :D

[Uskler]

Here is my first card:

 

 

 

 

 

Tell what you think. :)

 

 

LORE: Cannot be Normal Summoned or set, this card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 3 face-up Sea-Serpent type monsters you control. The turn this card is Special Summoned, your opponent cannot use Trap cards until the end of this turn. If this card attacks, you must banish one Water type monster from your Hand, or Graveyard.

[BlueEyespyro078]

I like it, and I like the cool artwork. I have not noticed many new sea serpants and this one sounds like it would be fun to use in a casual duel with friends.  I am not that good with making realistic cards, but the lore sounds balanced to me.  The ATK/ DEF is what I would say is balanced because of the  "If this card attacks, you must banish one Water type monster from your Hand, or Graveyard." part.

[Uskler]

I like it, and cool artwork. Sounds fun to use in a duel with friends.

Thank you. :)

[Sora1499]

Meh, it's mediocre. The only high tier deck that runs sea serpents is Merlans, and they A. Don't want their stuff banished. B. Have much better things to do with their advantage then go -3 to invest it in a beater. The trap freezing effect is decent, but limited by the card's application. Also, the last effect requires you to give up your graveyard to attack. This isn't that big of a point, but it is something to point out. If I were you, I'd make it banish only 2 monsters to be summoned and completely nix the last effect.

[Uskler]

Meh, it's mediocre. The only high tier deck that runs sea serpents is Merlans, and they A. Don't want their stuff banished. B. Have much better things to do with their advantage then go -3 to invest it in a beater. The trap freezing effect is decent, but limited by the card's application. Also, the last effect requires you to give up your graveyard to attack. This isn't that big of a point, but it is something to point out. If I were you, I'd make it banish only 2 monsters to be summoned and completely nix the last effect.

 

Ah, I see what your saying about the last part. I'll have that fixed up in bit, thanks for the advice. :D

[Uskler]

Okay,,,how about now?

 

 

 

 

 

LORE: Cannot be Normal Summoned or set, this card can only be Special Summoned by banishing 2 face-up Sea-Serpent type monsters you control, or 2 or more in your graveyard. The turn this card is Special Summoned, your opponent cannot use Trap cards until the end of your opponent's next End Phase.  You can banish 2 cards from your hand; this card can attack twice during the same Battle Phase this turn.