[Mechanizers Arc-Type](cute robots)First card's in more than a year so feel free to scrutinize heavily

[Cocodomoco]

[spoiler=Monsters]

[spoiler=Effect]

If you control no face up monsters: special summon this card in face up attack position. This card may not be destroyed as a result of battle. If this card is in face up Defense position: Destroy it. If you take battle damage involving battle with this card: your opponent must discard 1 and 1 additional card for every thousand points of damage you take. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

If your opponent discarded a card their last turn or this turn: this card may attack directly. Once pet turn if you would take battle damage you may discard one card: halve the battle damage. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

If you control 2 face up level 3 "Mechanizer" monsters: Special summon this card (from your hand). If this card was special summoned by its own effect: destroy it at the end of your turn.If one of your face up "Mechanizer" monsters would be destroyed as a result of battle you may sacrifice this card: negate the attack and end the battle phase. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

You may sacrifice this card: negate the activation of a spell, trap, or monster effect. Your standby phase after this effect was activated you may discard one card: special summon this card in face up attack position. If this card attacks your opponent directly: your opponent discards 1 card.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

If this card destroys a monster by battle: your opponent must reveal one random card in their hand you may chose one of the following:

-Destroy that card

-Draw one card [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

You my normal summon this card in face up defense position. Your opponent must discard 1 card to declare an attack. If your opponent chose's a face up "Mechanizer" monster you control as an attack target you may discard 1 card: This card becomes the target of that attack. Your opponent takes no battle damage with battle involving this card.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Spells and Traps]

[spoiler=Effect]

Every Time your opponent discards a card: inflict 500 points of damage to their life points. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

All face up "Mechanizer" monsters you control gain 200 ATK per face up "Mechanizer" monster you control. If a face up Mechanizer monster you control would be destroyed as a result of battle: destroy this card instead.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

Activate this when your opponent discards a card: Draw one card.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

You may discard up to 2 cards: Special summon as many "Mechanzier" monsters as cards discarded. Any monster summoned by this effect is destroyed during your next standby phase after this card was activated. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

When a face up "Mechanizer" monster you control is destroyed: add one card with the same name from your deck or graveyard to your hand. [/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

If a face up "Mechanizer" monster is special summoned from the graveyard: you may equip this card to it. The equip card does piercing damage and may not be destroyed by the effect of a spell or trap.[/spoiler][/spoiler]

[spoiler=Extra Deck]

[spoiler=Effect]

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-tuner "Mechanizer" monster

This card is treated as a "Mechanzier" monster. This card may not be destroyed by the effect of a spell, trap, or monster. Once per turn you may discard one card: Increase the ATK of one face up "Mechanizer" monster you control by 300 for every card in your hand until the end of this turn.[/spoiler]

[spoiler=Effect]

1 "Mechanizer: Prototype" + 1 or more non-tuner "Mexhanzier" monsters

As long as this card remains face up on the field you take no battle damage with battle involving "Mechanizer" monsters. Once per turn during your standby phase your opponent must discard one random card from their hand. If the card is a:

Spell: You draw 1 card.

Trap: Chose one face up monster your opponent controls: Destroy that monster.

Monster: inflict damage to your opponents life points equal to that monsters level X 200.[/spoiler]

 

For the XYZ i wasnt sure which picture i liked more

[spoiler=Effect]

3 level 3 monsters

This card inflicts  pierceing damage. Once per turn you may detach one XYZ material monster from this card: Your oponent discards one monster card for every face up "Mechanizer" monster you control. This card gains 500 ATK for every card dscarded until the end of this turn. As long as this card has an XYZ material monster attached to it this card may not be destroyed by battle. If this card has no XYZ material monsters attached to it during your main phase you may: discard one card: attach one monster in your graveyard to this card. [/spoiler][/spoiler]

 

My idea for a deck with these cards... if anyone has any ideas please leave a comment.

[spoiler=Possible Deck]

 

 

Monsters

 

Turbo Synchro X 2

Mechanizer: Prototype X 3

Mechanizer: Pot of Flames X 3

Mechanzier: Static Rat X 3

Mechanizer: Stinger X 3

Mechanzier: Black Widow X 3

Mechanizer: Sonic Assaulter X 2

Mechanzier: Remote Defense Bot x 2

 

Spells & Traps

 

Play Times Over X 2

Mechanized Village X 2

Extra Provisions X 3

Trash or Treasure X 2

Pot of Duality X 2

 

Endless Production X 3

Heart for the Heartless X 2

Gravity Bind X 3

 

Extra Deck

 

The Mad Tinker X 2

Mechanzier: Steam Brawler X 3

Mechanzier: Destructotron 10000 X 3

Brionac, Dragon of the Ice Barrier

StarDust Dragon X 2

[/spoiler]

[Cocodomoco]

am i allowed to bump? 

[Developous]

Looks interesting....

[Cocodomoco]

Thanks for the Feed Back. :) 

[Cocodomoco]

Edited: added possible deck.

[Harrison H]

Very Nice cards. How did you make the XYZs

[~Shin~]

[spoiler=Card by Card]Prototype:
It is here for the theme, and limiting Brawler, which is fine.

 

POF:
Let only discard 1 card, As it is now it could become a part of some hand control/deck out deck or something. Even 1 discard should keep an opponent off it unless their winning that turn. Also, I fell that it should ethier be battle immunen only when attacked or only discard when it is attacked. But if you really want it to work with Rat, add more limitions.

 

Rat:
Too generic, make it work only when the discard is by a Mechanizer, or better yet give it another condition as more of a player playing the archtype than a cost. This card will do a lot of damage, I mean look at all the protection and boosts you are giving it, then look at all an opponent answers wasted, then look at how easy is is to get 3 of it on field. Bad card IMO.

 

Stinger:
Your most balance card IMO. Nice.

 

Widow:
The last effect is out of place. The first is okey, had it been OOPT. But as with your other cards you just keep ignoring combos with your card and real cards.

 

Sonic:
Remove the draw effect it is abusable. If you want it to keep being a draw power, then make it search other LV 3 Mechanizer monsters, IMO that is okey. Also, should not discard instead of destroying so it work better with your theme and Rat as well !?

 

Bot:
Does the effect mean that you can normal summon this card without a tribute in face-up defense position or that you can tribut summon it in face-up defense position !?

I assume it is the later as the effect suggests. Pretty powerful effect, maybe it sould not be on a 3000 wall, IMO ethier lower its DEF or prevent its

special summon.

 

PTO:
This card is too generic, I think it should only damage when the discard is by a Mechanizer effect.

 

Village:
I think that you meant 200 for every other face-up Mechanizer, as you can

 

Provisions:
Again, the same as POT, it is too generic.

 

TorT:
SS from where !? hand I assume...

Anyway, this is the reason I think Bot need a "Cannot be Special Summoned" clause.

 

Production:
Outclassed by other IRL cards.

 

Heart:
How would this work !?

 

Tinker:
I am not sure whether this effect is okey or not. I mean you already have Villlage, with this Sonic and Rat become just too much...

 

Brawler:
Haa, finally we see Prototype use. The second effect just mess up an opponent hand for no reason, yet you think a player should gain something from it !?
Needs to be reworked.

 

Destructotron:
Again, mess up hands for no good reason. And IMO the two last effects are just there to make sure your opponent NEVER comeback. But remember that lv3 IRL is spammable.[/spoiler]

 

Messing with hand is risky. :p

At first i saw your LV3 monster, they are able to hold them selfs together discarding some cards, and I thought that you boss monsters would just beatsticks/walls or some 1 time answers, as the opponent hand is already messed up. Alas, you just kept making the weak monsters more powerful, still if we only look at the cards of this archtype it would be ok but we also must look at real cards.

 

Hope I helped.