Dark Raider

[Developous]

 

Old pic, challenging effect. Comment, plz.

[NightDranzer]

Bad description, Average pic. 3.5/10

 

Really sorry for the low score, but it is really the most I can give you, my apologies.

[Developous]

I only built it for the effect.

 

Basically, you can, when it does battle damage, send a card of your choice from the opponent's deck, but you cannot see it. The damage also improves the monster by 200 attack and defense.

 

The catch? No direct attacks.

So, it's just a little better than V-Lord in some ways.

 

So... opponents will think twice about summoning monsters when it's present. Especially alone. After all, no monsters, it cannot attack.

[Apocolypse]

(When this card inflicts damage to your opponent, select 1 card in your opponent's Deck and remove it from play, unseen, then increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200.)

Maybe something like that would be closer. 6.5/10

[RickiMinaj]

what kinda image is that

ouch

improve the image

but for now

7/10

[NightDranzer]

I agree with apocalypse. To make a good description we need to know how to describe his ability and know how to use the game terms accordingly. Example instead of sacrifice it's tribute. instead of piercing it's deal the difference between the ATK of your monster and the DEF of your opponent's monster directly to your opponent's Life Points.

[Developous]

done.

[bury the year]

"During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, remove from play face-down the top card of your opponent's Deck and increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200. You cannot look at the card as long as it remains face-down."

 

That's the best I got for OCG.

[Parting Shot]

Hmmm, it seems a little overpowered. You get to remove a card from play and increase it's stats by 200 whenever you do battle damage, but you always do battle damage because of it's other effect. So, whenever you destroy a monster, you also remove a card and get stronger. If you took out the piercing effect, it would be more balanced. And, tectonix's suggestion would be good to change to. Other than that, pretty good card.

 

overall - 11.11/13.69 ^_^

[NightDranzer]

"During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card' date=' inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. When this card inflicts Battle Damage, remove from play face-down the top card of your opponent's Deck and increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200. You cannot look at the card as long as it remains face-down."

 

That's the best I got for OCG.

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That and, This monster can't attack a player directly

[Developous]

I added that "Cannot attack directly" already....

[Huntar!]

terrible pic. 6/10

[Dragon_Leader]

Picture needs work. Effect is confusing and if the card is removed for the whole game then the card should be 5 stars.