Darai, Hatred Incarnate

[Khalleb]

Hi! I'm new, and this is the first card I ever created. It is probably well overpowered. If you like it, I could make a whole set out of it.

 

Disclaimer: I do not own the artwork used in these cards. I use it to enhance the visual impression of the cards, and in no way do I intend to make a profit from unauthorized usage of these cards/artworks.

 

 

CARD TEXT: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play all Fiend-Type monsters in your graveyard from play (min. 3).

This card can attack all your opponents monsters in the same time. If it does, you must skip your next battle phase.

By discarding 10 cards from your deck to the graveyard, your opponent skips his/hers next turn (you can use this effect only once in a duel).

 

 

And added it's counterpart:

 

 

CARD TEXT: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play all Fairy-Type monsters in your graveyard from play (min. 3).

When this card is Special Summoned succesefully, your opponent skips his/her next 3 Battle Phases.

By discarding 10 cards from your deck, destroy all monsters your opponent controls (you can use this effect only once in a duel).

[HMNISGwahahaha]

It's overpowered, but you can raise the minimum number of monsters required for Summoning it and maybe decrease it's ATK/DEF to 3000/2000 or something

7/10

[Dragon God]

error's

8/10

[cazz]

a little to over powered cut the att/def to 3000/1000 and set a limmit on how many times u can use the eff

i give it 7/10

[caleb14u]

The effect of sending the top card of your deck to the graveyard and stopping the opponent playing their next turn is a bit overpowered, But the card overall is good.

[Lucas Maximus]

Nice card, just give the image a better background; doesn't stand out very well.

Still great effort, i hope to see more from you in future. :D

7.8/12

[Khalleb]

Thx for the feedback! :D

I edited it a bit, it should be less overpowered, but still - I'd put it on the forbidden list.

:P

 

Yeah, I also added a counterpart card.

[Frostnova425]

lol when i read incarnate of revealing light's effect - the first thing that came to my mind was Demise XD

great pictures 8/10

[overheat]

actually i dont think the card is overpowered i think its just perfect,

great job

[Khalleb]

Thx!

 

Oh, and

*bump

[Grayall]

Yubel, terror incarnate????

:D:D

Good card, 8/10..

[Dragon God]

(for your second card)

couple of error's good pic

still improving good job

9/10 ^_^

[Slade]

OCG errors, overpowered. Here's some tips:

An effect cannot "discard" from the deck. It should read "Send the top # cards from *player*'s deck to the Graveyard"

"This monster cannot be special summoned except by removing all Fiend-type monsters in your Graveyard from play. This effect cannot be activated unless at least 3 Fiend-type monsters exist in your Graveyard." <-- I'm not sure. My OCG is decent, but not perfect.

Due to there over-powered-ness, I'd normally give them a 5/10, but because you're new, it'll be a 7/10. I hope to see more from you in the future, provided you check up on your OCG.

Oh, and the first one needs a background. I might try making one.

I made one. I only spent about a minute on it, though. I'm tired now.

Have fun with it. *yawn*

See you all tomorrow.

[SOUL]

It's overpowered' date=' but you can raise the minimum number of monsters required for Summoning it and maybe decrease it's ATK/DEF to 3000/2000 or something

7/10

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I agree. :)