My First Topic! Angelic Rebirth Dragon

[Silent Luminus]

So I've been on here making cards for a while, but I now can finally save them.

Now for the card; I tried to get the ocg right, but feel free to fix whatever mistakes I have made.

 

Thanks!

 

 

1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner LIGHT monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 1 Heavenly Reincarnation Counter on it (max.3). When this card destroys a monster by battle: Switch this card to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step and place 1 Heavenly Reincarnation Counter on it. You can remove 3 Heavenly Reincarnation Counters from this card; Special Summon 1monster from your Graveyard. The Special Summoned monster cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Up to twice per turn: You can banish 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard; negate the effect of a card that targets this card.

[Zazubat]

You have always been able to save your cards here, you just need an account, which you have. Anyway the card:

It's pretty decent actually. A non-Tuner LIGHT monster is not that card to get, but it also keeps it a bit more balanced as not all Decks can run it. There aren't any LIGHT exclusive Synchro Decks I can think of, but anything that can run this card can make it quite decent. The slow Grave Summon is perfectly balanced, as it's sorta slow, but allows you to get something powerful back and make it immune to most effects. I might suggest that you make the this card target the card in the Graveyard though, but that's just me. I do however think that the last effect needs a nerf to only be once per turn, as it will make it hard to get rid of, except by Dark Hole of course. So for one of your first posts here, good job.

 

The OCG could need some work though, and I will help you a bit with it:

When this card is Synchro Summoned: Place 1 Heavenly Reincarnation Counter on it (max.3). When this card destroys a monster by battle: Change this card to Defense Position at the end of the Damage Step and place 1 Heavenly Reincarnation Counter on it. You can remove 3 Heavenly Reincarnation Counters from this card; Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. The Special Summoned monster cannot be targeted by your opponent's card effects. Twice per turn, during either player's turn, if this card is targeted by a card effect: You can banish 1 LIGHT monster in your Graveyard; negate that effect.

[Silent Luminus]

Thanks for the review and the OCG fix; I see that you need to capitalize the letter behind the colon; that's what I was doing wrong. ^^

[YugiohTheCardMaker]

This is a really cool card.

[Zazubat]

Thanks for the review and the OCG fix; I see that you need to capitalize the letter behind the colon; that's what I was doing wrong. ^^

You don't have to, but it makes it look better. It also makes it easier to spot if it's a colon or semi-colon, as some computers might have low resolution, which can mess how people see the text.

[Silent Luminus]

You don't have to, but it makes it look better. It also makes it easier to spot if it's a colon or semi-colon, as some computers might have low resolution, which can mess how people see the text.

Actually, I did a little research, and apparently it is necessary. The first letter after a colon is capitalized, while the first letter after a semicolon is not (unless it's a term that is usually capitalized).

[Zazubat]

Actually, I did a little research, and apparently it is necessary. The first letter after a colon is capitalized, while the first letter after a semicolon is not (unless it's a term that is usually capitalized).

Aesthetically it is, I always change it when I fix the OCG, but it doesn't affect the card in any way.