Chinese Zodiac

[majicfrog]

Hello! This is my first set of cards! Please, if there is even something small I could fix, tell me. It is very hard for me to improve without feedback.

 

Zodiac Monsters: art done by ered, cropped so they'll fit by me http://ered.deviantart.com/

Trines: art done by SilverDragonGrrl, backround by me. http://silverdragongrrl.deviantart.com/

the "rat" picture on the first trine, however, is done by Kaitsuka, for SilverDragonGrrl did not have a picture for the rat.

Yin-Yang: art done by gilbert25 http://gilbert25.deviantart.com/

[Lucas Maximus]

Great card, you have done a very good job effort wise and idea wise, i hope to see more from you in future, well done. ^_^

9/10

[Apocolypse]

Use your cards at home to help with your text, CAPS and such. Great effort, 8/10 for the effort.

[majicfrog]

BUMP...

please comment, its not that hard, and it gives feedback. Not to mention it eliminates the need for "BUMP"s

[Kraft]

4/5. Minor OCG errors, and the trine pictures are a bit... odd... but the other pictures are great! The Yin-Yang card is my favorite.

 

Hint: Life Points, Graveyard, Battle Phase, & Main Phase needs to be capitalized. You do not neet do add "points" after ATK... just saying ATK is usually fine. Hope that was of help.

[majicfrog]

4/5. Minor OCG errors' date=' and the trine pictures are a bit... odd... but the other pictures are great! The Yin-Yang card is my favorite.

 

Hint: Life Points, Graveyard, Battle Phase, & Main Phase needs to be capitalized. You do not neet do add "points" after ATK... just saying ATK is usually fine. Hope that was of help.

[/quote']

Thanks! I just updated the first post and fixed some of those minor errors. (All... those... hours... re-uploading... :lol:)

[Kraft]

Great, they are getting better, still more to fix though... They're a great start, though...

[Bloodrun]

um its he or she not he/she

some other problems

and

i dont think the pictures click

rating

7/10

[majicfrog]

um its he or she not he/she

some other problems

and

i dont think the pictures click

rating

7/10

 

Thanks, I'll fix the he/she thing. What do you mean by "click"?

 

EDIT: The cards with "he/she" have been updated to "he or she"

[Bloodrun]

um its he or she not he/she

some other problems

and

i dont think the pictures click

rating

7/10

 

Thanks' date=' I'll fix the he/she thing. What do you mean by "click"?

[/quote']

 

well wait on the he/she thing, i might be wrong, im checking right now,

and about the click thing

i mean the picturs just dont cut it for me, in other words i dont neccessarily like them. but all in all, im not saying that there bad.

[Baldrick_Alpha]

not bad, not bad at all. 8/10

[majicfrog]

um its he or she not he/she

some other problems

and

i dont think the pictures click

rating

7/10

 

Thanks' date=' I'll fix the he/she thing. What do you mean by "click"?

[/quote']

 

well wait on the he/she thing, i might be wrong, im checking right now,

and about the click thing

i mean the picturs just dont cut it for me, in other words i dont neccessarily like them. but all in all, im not saying that there bad.

The trine pictures I understand, they stink. I did the backround. XD

The yin-yang picture I thought was very good...

and I could understand the monster pictures, but they are one of the few full sets of Chinese Zodiac Pictures. (I considered another set with better pictures, but it only had 5 Zodiac pictures and I did not want the pictures to have completly different styles)

[Bloodrun]

um its he or she not he/she

some other problems

and

i dont think the pictures click

rating

7/10

 

Thanks' date=' I'll fix the he/she thing. What do you mean by "click"?

[/quote']

 

well wait on the he/she thing, i might be wrong, im checking right now,

and about the click thing

i mean the picturs just dont cut it for me, in other words i dont neccessarily like them. but all in all, im not saying that there bad.

The trine pictures I understand, they stink. I did the backround. XD

The yin-yang picture I thought was very good...

and I could understand the monster pictures, but they are one of the few full sets of Chinese Zodiac Pictures. (I considered another set with better pictures, but it only had 5 Zodiac pictures and I did not want the pictures to have completly different styles)

 

its ok

i understand how hard it is to find good pictures now-a-days ^_^

[majicfrog]

Hm... BUMP...

[majicfrog]

One last bump before it is assumed "dead"

[megakenny]

very good,nice effects 8.2/10

[Khalleb]

Great cards... Like the idea...

A few ocg I noticed, though.

Overall, a great job.

8.5/10

[Atomix]

9/10

[majicfrog]

Great cards... Like the idea...

A few ocg I noticed' date=' though.

Overall, a great job.

8.5/10

[/quote']

Well, if there's anything specific anyone would like to point out about ocg errors in my cards, that would be a huge help. If I have an ocg error chances are I'm not going to find it if I check for them, because I thought it was right.