Zandorum Posted May 25, 2013 Report Share Posted May 25, 2013 Can some one help me with correcting any problems with the text as well as any balancing that is needed. Name: Xyz Defense Tactic Type: Trap Sub-Type: Continuous Effect: When your opponent targets a monster on your side of the field for an attack and you control atleast 1 face-up Xyz Monster, you can destroy 1 Xyz Monster to negate the attack. If your opponent activates a card effect that inflicts effect damage you can destroy 1 Xyz Monster you control to negate the card's activation and destroy it. If you would take Battle Damage, you can destroy 1 Xyz Monster you control to reduce the Battle Damage to 0. Each turn you must pay 500 Life points to keep this card on the field, you can negate this with this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoRWBY65 Posted May 25, 2013 Report Share Posted May 25, 2013 The sub-type is continuous, not infinite. The final part can be worded "During your end phase, you must pay 500 life points, or destroy this card." This is kinda weird as far as an Xyz support goes. Most cards with effects like this dealing with Xyz detach materials, but if you want to destroy them instead, I give you points for not taking the usual way. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zandorum Posted June 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2013 The sub-type is continuous, not infinite. The final part can be worded "During your end phase, you must pay 500 life points, or destroy this card." This is kinda weird as far as an Xyz support goes. Most cards with effects like this dealing with Xyz detach materials, but if you want to destroy them instead, I give you points for not taking the usual way. 9.5/10 I felt detaching is too overpowered for a card of this strength. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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