Good Potion? [Codex Single]

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A simple quick-play, could become pretty useful, and free draw, so hey that's something.

[spoiler=Is it just me or does all subpar Quick-Plays need a draw clause nowadays?]

Target 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent controls; the first target gains ATK equal to the differene between that target and the second target until the End Phase, then your opponent can choose to either gain 2000 Life Points or inflict 1000 damage to your Life Points. If this Set card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard: You can shuffle this card into your Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card.

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[L0SS]

The image is broken, although I could see it a minute ago... strange.

 

As for the card, I think this is a corrected version of the lore: 

 

'Target 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent controls; your monster gains ATK equal to the difference between its ATK and the ATK of your opponents monster, until the End Phase. If this Set card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard; you can shuffle this card into your Deck: Draw 1 card.' 

 

I used Power Frame as a reference. 

 

This card is a sort of Semi-honest, but is more flexible in that it can be used at any point in the turn; and is obviously a quick-spell that is generic. This leads me on to think it is OP'd, because it does a better job than Lance does at taking down unsuspecting boss monsters; and because it gives Honest style boosts, a limited card, without the LIGHT limitation.

 

I will say, however, that the draw effect is nice and well thought out. But I'd think about either giving it a Battle Phase only clause, or working it differently. 

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The image is broken, although I could see it a minute ago... strange.

As for the card, I think this is a corrected version of the lore:

'Target 1 monster you control and 1 monster your opponent controls; your monster gains ATK equal to the difference between its ATK and the ATK of your opponents monster, until the End Phase. If this Set card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard; you can shuffle this card into your Deck: Draw 1 card.'

I used Power Frame as a reference.

This card is a sort of Semi-honest, but is more flexible in that it can be used at any point in the turn; and is obviously a quick-spell that is generic. This leads me on to think it is OP'd, because it does a better job than Lance does at taking down unsuspecting boss monsters; and because it gives Honest style boosts, a limited card, without the LIGHT limitation.

I will say, however, that the draw effect is nice and well thought out. But I'd think about either giving it a Battle Phase only clause, or working it differently.

I actually intended for it to still target the card after the semi-colon. Also, your semi-colon and colons are wrong, and it's not suppose to be a cost to shuffle it into the Deck. Anyway, it might be sorta powerful. Should I make some sort of restricting or cost to it? I'm thinking some sort of payment, and also maybe a Level 4 or lower restriction?

[L0SS]

I actually intended for it to still target the card after the semi-colon. 

Ah, okay; fair enough then. Obviously the phrasing is going to be different then, so I think it should be okay in that respect. 

 

 

Also, your semi-colon and colons are wrong, and it's not suppose to be a cost to shuffle it into the Deck. 

So they are *note to self: need more coffee*; as for the cost thing, again, I need coffee. Remind not to correct something when I'm tired/wrong in the first place. 

 

I think a Level 4 restriction would defeat the point, but a simple cost should make it work. It's nice and splashable, so maybe a discard or something? You can probably be more imaginative than that. *goes to rob a Starbucks*

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I have added something something.

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bumps

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bump.

[Therrion]

A rather interesting card, not for competitive play, but is a balanced and interesting card.

Sweet and simple.

8.4/10