Veniet Posted June 7, 2013 Report Share Posted June 7, 2013 [spoiler='Effect']1 WATER Tuner+1 or more non-tuner LIGHT monstersThis card cannot be destroyed by battle with FIRE monsters. Once per turn: You can banish 1 face-up Warrior-type monster from your field to give this card the following Effect: *If this card is targeted: Negate the attack or effect that is targeting it. During this turn, Xyz Monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF and have their effects negated.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 7, 2013 Report Share Posted June 7, 2013 So, you need to have Light monsters, Water monsters, and Warriors to use this card. I don't know for sure, but that seems like a bit too many different things for one card. Especially one that isn't all that great. The ability could be useful, but I can't really look past the thing I mentioned before. If I'm wrong, a more experianced member should correct me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 So, you need to have Light monsters, Water monsters, and Warriors to use this card. I don't know for sure, but that seems like a bit too many different things for one card. Especially one that isn't all that great. The ability could be useful, but I can't really look past the thing I mentioned before. If I'm wrong, a more experianced member should correct me. So, you need to have Light monsters, Water monsters, and Warriors to use this card. I don't know for sure, but that seems like a bit too many different things for one card. Especially one that isn't all that great. The ability could be useful, but I can't really look past the thing I mentioned before. If I'm wrong, a more experianced member should correct me. Well, there are many LIGHT warriors, but the card says it don't specifically need Warriors to Summon it. Using its effect is not as situational as it may seem, considering the many Warriors around. Also, beinig used in a Water-themed deck increases the chances of Summoning. In the end this will be the vanguard of a new Archetype I'll be working on. ANy advice would be great ^^. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 8, 2013 Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 Just use WATER Tuners in a Deck with a LIGHT Warrior frame to up this cards accessibility. Remove the Return key presses in the card's effect, the space between the material and the effect is far to great and overall hurts the aesthetic value. The FIRE part is random, but flavorful and adds to the taste. Also, the wording is off. Just make it say: "Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 Warrior-type monster you control; this card gains the following effect: -If this card is targeted: Negate the attack or effect that is targeting it. During this turn, Xyz Monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF and have their effects negated." If that's to far off of what you were going for, change where you see fit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 Just use WATER Tuners in a Deck with a LIGHT Warrior frame to up this cards accessibility. Remove the Return key presses in the card's effect, the space between the material and the effect is far to great and overall hurts the aesthetic value. The FIRE part is random, but flavorful and adds to the taste. Also, the wording is off. Just make it say: "Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can banish 1 Warrior-type monster you control; this card gains the following effect: -If this card is targeted: Negate the attack or effect that is targeting it. During this turn, Xyz Monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF and have their effects negated." If that's to far off of what you were going for, change where you see fit. Thank you once again Terrion; I think I'll go with your statement. I'd like you to explain though if you would what you mean by aesthetic value? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 12, 2013 Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 It makes the card less appealing to the eye. Aside from being just wrong to do, it cramps the cards effect. Under the card in its "Lore" section, you can press enter whenever, but on the card itself, there is never an entire blank line in a card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 12, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2013 It makes the card less appealing to the eye. Aside from being just wrong to do, it cramps the cards effect. Under the card in its "Lore" section, you can press enter whenever, but on the card itself, there is never an entire blank line in a card. I believe I was able to fix this. Opinion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 13, 2013 Report Share Posted June 13, 2013 It should be replaced with this card to clarify that this card gains the effect, not the banished monster. (If I'm not mistaken on OCG here) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veniet Posted June 13, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 13, 2013 Thanks again, Terri! I updated it with your suggestion; Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeramigamer Posted June 13, 2013 Report Share Posted June 13, 2013 in my opinion replace WATER monster with Warrior monster as synchro material because it would make it more playable because there are lots of support for LIGHT Warriors that you can even make a deck with and add this in the extra deck but then again banishing your own monsters from the field to do something isn't really ideal Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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