LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 8, 2013 Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 Okay, this is a random idea that popped into my head. It needs a lot of work, but here you go. Lore: During your Battle Phase, you can have this card's ATK become 500: Until the End Phase, this card can attack your opponent directly. When this card inflicts battle damage to your opponents Life Points, they must reveal the top card of their library. Activate the following effect depending on type of card revealed. - Monster. Inflict damage to opponent equal to it's level x200. Then, if the monster is level 3 or lower, special summon it to your side of the field. -Spell. Banish the card. If it is an Equip card, you may Equip it to a legal monster on the field. -Trap. You take 1000 damage, and the opponent may Set the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junkwarriordude Posted June 8, 2013 Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 The spell card banished is way too much. You can use send it to the bottom of the deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 8, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 Thanks for the input, waiting for a few more replies before changing it. Won't be on today in a few minutes, so to keep this from vanishing completly, I hope I get a few more replies. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 8, 2013 Report Share Posted June 8, 2013 I can't really make perfect OCG changes so I won't attempt. I get what you are saying, though, so it's fine until Zazu or one of the other popular better than me OCGers shows up. The Spell card effect is just fine, and earns it the name of Aura Thief (considering you play MTG and Aura is MTG equal of Equip Spells, it wouldn't make sense to change this effect to something else). Plus, hardly anyone uses Equip Spells anymore, aside from Spellbook of Life, which wouldn't be affected by this card. The way its worded, you make it 500 ATK, it can hit directly forever, but returns to normal ATK during the End Phase. Did you intend that during the second turn, it would be a direct attacking 2100 Monster, or am I reading this completely wrong. It comes off as in only the first attack would be 500. If you wanted each direct attack to be such, something upon the lines of "During your Battle Phase, you can have this card's ATK become 500: Until the End Phase, this card can attack your opponent directly." Again, I don't claim perfect OCG, but you get my point. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 Oh, wow thanks for the reply. Yes, MTG certainly was in my mind when naming it. Oh, right. Yeah it was supposed to be each direct attack would be 500. I'll be fixing that momentarily. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 9, 2013 Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 When typing lore onto a card, never press enter unless listing effects it can activate. After the attacking directly effect, you need not press enter. Only after "revealed." Do you need it, and ofc, after each effect based on the type revealed, as you did properly. To sum it up, remove the Enter you inserted after the attacking directly effect and the card should be good to go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LordCowCowCowCowCowCowCowCow Posted June 9, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2013 Thanks a lot. Okay, fixed it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.