Zazubat Posted June 10, 2013 Report Share Posted June 10, 2013 The "Revision Challenge" is where I go back and remake my old cards. You can view more on how I do that HERE Old Card: Original Lore: If this card was used for a Synchro Summon, when the summoned Synchro Monster is destroyed, you can return this card from your graveyard to hand. Fixed Lore: If this card was used as a Synchro Material Monster, when that Sychro Monster is destroyed: You can return this card from your Graveyard to your hand. My Thoughts: It's a pretty neat concept, it doens't do a whole lot else, so that might make it pretty weak, but that could also balance it out. I have chosen to make it similar to the original. Also, the image is amazing. New Card: New Lore: A Synchro Monster that used this card as a Synchro Material Monster gains this effect. * When this card leaves the field: You can target 1 monster used as Synchro Material Monster that remained in the Graveyard while this card was face-up on the field; return that target to the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 10, 2013 Report Share Posted June 10, 2013 The art makes alot more sense as a Sea Serpent/Reptile then it ever would for a Fiend, imo. So that part is a plus. The stat change makes it a formidible card on it's own, capable of adding Synchro capabilities to those tunnel visioned beatdown players out there. It remaining DARK allows it to work with DAD, and become the first DARK Sea Serpent-type monster. It's effect could work great with decks that just want to pump out Synchros via swarm from hand, like decks using Goblindbergh/Photon Thraser/etc. by replenishing hand after the swarm, avoiding any -'s Synchroing that way would usually cause. Other then that, it easily becomes the best Lv. 4 Tuner, both in terms of effect and ATK (excluding Trap Eater, which can't be NSed/Set). Off Topic: I think seaing (eh, eh!?) a SEA Serpent in a Swamp is rather humorous. Great card! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted June 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks for the review. Also, bump. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jordan201 Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 I tune level 4 Swamp Servant with my level 4 ghost gardna, Synchro Summon! "Insert Level 8 Synchro Monster that follows criteria here" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted June 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 I tune level 4 Swamp Servant with my level 4 ghost gardna, Synchro Summon! "Insert Level 8 Synchro Monster that follows criteria here" uhm, what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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