Tengou Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 A new one! Card Lore: Equip Spell Cards you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. Once per turn during your End Phase, if this card did not battle during your Battle Phase: You can target 1 Equip Spell Card in your Graveyard; return it to the hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 "Equip Spell Cards you control cannot be destroyed by card effects. During your End Phase, if this card did not battle during your Battle Phase: You can target 1 Equip Spell Card in your Graveyard; return it to the hand." A very basic Equip support monster. I think it would be better, however, if you decreased his Level by 1 and ATK by 200, making him easier to play and thus more useful. Other then that, the card is entirely solid. The 1800 DEF wards off Maestroke, the DARK Attribute goes with the future archetype, and Pyro goes with the fact that he is a blacksmith. He would be the first DARK Pyro-type monster in the game, also, which is always cool (to see a first in the game, that is). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tengou Posted June 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks for your criticism! In retrospect, I'm all for making this a level 6 monster. I have something better in mind for this archetype's ace monsters, anyways. Edited and updated (level decreased to 6, ATK decreased to 2400). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. guy Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 I would just make it a once-per-turn effect with a battle restriction. Unless you wanted the effect to be at the end phase only? Talking about the grave to hand effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeramigamer Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 If it was Warrior type would be more playable because of all the great warrior equip cards . Other than that the effect is very supportive of equip cards and would be an option in my warrior equip deck if it was warrior type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Make sure to update the card lore underneath the card also. Also, its effect would only activate once, to my understanding. Just to be safe, you could make sure by adding a 1 in there or by adding Once per turn before the During your End Phase (make sure to uncapitalize During in this case). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tengou Posted June 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Thanks! Fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 11, 2013 Report Share Posted June 11, 2013 Insert a comma after "Once per turn" in the lore under the card. The change is to minor to go through the trouble of editing it, since it's such a minor thing, but Once per turn always has a comma after it when used at the beginning of the sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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