The Abyssal Ones Support

[yueangel]

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Once per turn you may detach 1 Xyz Material from this card for "Abyss" and "Abyssal" card cannot be destroyed by battle. (Damage calculation is applied normally.) and effect card 1 turn. This effect can be activated in your opponent's turn.

 

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When this card Xyz Summoned, you can add 1 spell or trap "Abyssal" from your deck to your hand. You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card for activate effect spell/trap "Abyssal" card from your graveyard or your field again. This effect can be activated in your opponent's turn.

 

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When this card Xyz Summoned, you can select 3 card from your opponent's graveyard to be Xyz Material for this card. Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card for destroy all monster on your opponent's field and hand. In every end phase you can select 3 card be destroyed by this card for banish that card. This effect can be activated in your opponent's turn.
 

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If you have Abyssal monster on your field you can negate effect card from your opponent and banish that card.

 

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Once per turn you can special summon 2 Abyssal monster from your hand and graveyard. In your main phase you can summon XYZ monster by ignore condition effect card.

 

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You gain 1000 Life Point per removed card.

[Therrion]

Might I suggest when creating your cards to look for real life examples of effects you are attempting to mash together. For example, each case in which you see "Once per turn" is followed by a "," or a ":". We have an OCG Thread that is devoted to assisting those with questions about the OCG, check it out! Onto your cards...

 

Elly

Decent. I suggest just making it generic. It doesn't really affect the board, and supports a widespread pool of random monsters/cards. I couldn't see this card finding a home, really, as it is outshone by many Rank 3 monsters already in the TCG/OCG.

 

Tear

This card would only work with Elly or Abyssal Kingshark, which is rather random to provide a support to. Fish Decks wouldn't really want to run this card due to the inconsistency it would have within the Deck. Again, a card without a home.

 

Rhythm

I believe you were attempting to make yourself be able to overlay any two monsters into a monster, ignoring the material requirements of that card. I will judge accordingly, stating that such an effect would be beyond overpowered, as Tour Guide shouldn't be able to make Big Eye or Neo Galaxy Eyes, ever. More Abyssal Kingshark support, which again is random and not needed.