Medivh Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 I was disappointed to find that my favorite Number monster was lacking a "Number C", so I created one. Might be slightly under/overpowered. CnC welcomed! Number C102: Divine Justicar LIGHT / Rank 5 [Fairy / Xyz / Effect] 2900 / 2000 4 Level 5 LIGHT monsters When this card is Special Summoned: Negate the effects of all face-up monsters your opponent controls, until this card is removed from the field. If this card has "Number 102: Holy Lightning Glorious Halo" as an Xyz Material, it gains this effect: ● Once per turn: You may detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; The ATK of 1 monster your opponent controls becomes 0, it's effect(s) are negated, and if there is a Spell or Trap card in the same column as the targeted monster, it and it's effect(s) cannot be activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Since #102 took 3 Level 4 LIGHTs to get out, wouldn't this need 4 Level 5 LIGHTs? Plus, this is in Multiple Cards. I only see 1 card. But yes, for a Rank-Up, this nets...a mass negation effect, and a column-based stun effect on a 2600 ATK body. The effects are good, but the stat boost from before could be a lot better, and the effect-negation isn't really anything new and interesting. #102 as it is isn't really worth getting out normally, so you need to make something worth Ranking Up into. And right now, this doesn't cut it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medivh Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Since #102 took 3 Level 4 LIGHTs to get out, wouldn't this need 4 Level 5 LIGHTs? Plus, this is in Multiple Cards. I only see 1 card. But yes, for a Rank-Up, this nets...a mass negation effect, and a column-based stun effect on a 2600 ATK body. The effects are good, but the stat boost from before could be a lot better, and the effect-negation isn't really anything new and interesting. #102 as it is isn't really worth getting out normally, so you need to make something worth Ranking Up into. And right now, this doesn't cut it. It would appear I've misposted. Would removing the "Until the End Phase" clause on the Mass Negation effect and bumping the ATK to 2900 break the card? I'll fix the Summoning conditions as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Considering its peers are a destruction/burn specialist at 2800 ATK and Utopia's worst nightmare at 3000 ATK, yeah, 2900 ATK would work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Medivh Posted June 17, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 I have increased the ATK and replaced the "Until the End Phase" with "Until this card is removed from the field." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Premier Alexander Romanov Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Wow. Now, to get the opinion of someone much more professional than me. *crosses fingers that Black doesn't lock this thread because of my stupidity* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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