Engine Archer!

[Ice Kirby]

Hello again, people of YCM! I'm taking a little risk here, but I think that this card turned out good. As always, there are flaws, so point them out and I will try to fix em!

Engine Archer; Level 4 Machine Type. Earth Attribute

Lore: Once per turn; You can reveal one level 5 or lower monster in your hand besides "Engine Archer"; Send it to the Graveyard and Special Summon any other copies of that card in your deck or hand to the field; Those monsters cannot be used to Tribute Summon. You cannot conduct your Battle Phase the same turn you activate this card's effect. 

So, how is it?

[Ice Kirby]

This is still basically top, but I'll bump this so it isn't forgotten :P

[Althemia]

This is still basically top, but I'll bump this so it isn't forgotten :P

Just so that you know, you can only bump once every 24 hours. Won't warn you though because you're still learning the ropes.

Effect: Actually loving it, but I can't help but feel that's a little bit on the too good side as it currently is. Maybe it's just me being incredibly poor at Theory-Oh! after waking up, but making this a splashable "Discard Level 4 to make a Shock Master" doesn't exactly seem like the fairest thing in the world. However one could argue that Shock Master is the problem in this case and not this guy, so I guess that's a thing. I also like how you got rid of the thing that made Summoner Monk a bad card. (Making it discard at resolution and not as a cost)

Design: I don't like the fact that it's actually pretty low on costs, though it does rely upon your hand more than anything so that's a thing. I'm not entirely sure on whether I like the design on it or not, encourages overextending for little to no cost and drawbacks aren't really considered of good design. I don't know though, I might actually just be awful atm and it could be perfectly fine for what it does.

Flavor: I don't understand the flavor really, not particularly a fan. The effect doesn't really suit with the entire feel of the card, so I guess that's a negative.

Overall: It's actually a pretty good attempt for one of your first cards. Flavor isn't all there and I'm not especially a big fan of the design, but I really do like the initial effect. Makes it seem like a weaker, more hand reliant but easier to reuse Rescue Rabbit.

[Ice Kirby]

Just so that you know, you can only bump once every 24 hours. Won't warn you though because you're still learning the ropes.

Effect: Actually loving it, but I can't help but feel that's a little bit on the too good side as it currently is. Maybe it's just me being incredibly poor at Theory-Oh! after waking up, but making this a splashable "Discard Level 4 to make a Shock Master" doesn't exactly seem like the fairest thing in the world. However one could argue that Shock Master is the problem in this case and not this guy, so I guess that's a thing. I also like how you got rid of the thing that made Summoner Monk a bad card. (Making it discard at resolution and not as a cost)

Design: I don't like the fact that it's actually pretty low on costs, though it does rely upon your hand more than anything so that's a thing. I'm not entirely sure on whether I like the design on it or not, encourages overextending for little to no cost and drawbacks aren't really considered of good design. I don't know though, I might actually just be awful atm and it could be perfectly fine for what it does.

Flavor: I don't understand the flavor really, not particularly a fan. The effect doesn't really suit with the entire feel of the card, so I guess that's a negative.

Overall: It's actually a pretty good attempt for one of your first cards. Flavor isn't all there and I'm not especially a big fan of the design, but I really do like the initial effect. Makes it seem like a weaker, more hand reliant but easier to reuse Rescue Rabbit.

Thanks for all the feedback, a weaker but recyclable Rescue Rabbit was what I was going for. On the flavor; I imagined the archer using the discarded monster as ammunition then shooting it towards empty monster zones :P But I see where you're coming from, could of made it another Rescue animal instead.

[Therrion]

Something about this card being OP makes me believe it is OP.

I won't go and get into combos like pointing out a discard of Crane results in a 2-3 material Xyz and a draw 2, or Star Drawing makes a rank 5 and a draw 2, or etc. etc. Just the fact you can +1 off of it is OP in Yu-Gi-Oh! You tend to never want to make a card a +1 straight up (aside from Normal Summon to search, which is a generally well accepted +1, but never +1 from Deck to field, especially when 2 are from the deck). You turn any monster into a Rescue Rabbit that is not picky, doesn't take up your Normal Summon, and doesn't care to negate their effects.

Now, if you wish to pursue the route of this effect, I suggest making it so it can only Summon 1 monster of that name from your Deck, also, make it not remove the BP. That way, you only get a 0 (never a straight up +1, which makes this card unbalanced should it remain). Make it also Special Summon only from the Deck. Then, this card is good at dumping a card in hand you need in grave as well as giving you the chance to get a second to grave/make an Xyz play, which you can't complain about. This card's Machine Status make for some interesting combos into Gear Gigant X in dedicating Machine Decks.