Parsee Posted June 21, 2013 Report Share Posted June 21, 2013 Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Spellcaster-type monster to your opponent's side of the field. If a monster Special Summoned this way is destroyed: Special Summon it, and if this card is destroyed by the same effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Defense position. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Green-Eyed Sorceress", its effects are negated. 1150 / 1800 Comments, please? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 21, 2013 Report Share Posted June 21, 2013 A fair and balanced (#FoxNews) approach at revival. You could just make this card similar to Abyssal Kingshark, in which I mean it can't be destroyed by effects that don't target it. That way, you don't have to mess with wording that is weird. A OCG fix: "This card cannot be destroyed by effects that don't target it. During either player's turn, you can discard 1 card: Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Spellcaster-Type monster from your Graveyard to your opponent's side of the field. If a monster Summoned this way is destroyed; Special Summon it." The OCG fix uses my suggestion, if you don't wish for my suggestion, then ignore the first sentence. I won't take a crack on how to word that last effect. Overall, nice card, I like it. Maybe make it once per turn just incase it could be OP, but I don't really believe it is. Just to be cautious, though, you could. I can't see many times you'd care to use this on your opponent's turn excluding when you have a Torrential Tribute waiting in prowl, but it's a nice option to have. Really good concept for a 1-Star Member. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parsee Posted June 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2013 I wanted to put a romantic Romeo and Juliet spin on the revival. In fact, I think I could do it better... Thanks for the comment, Therrion. You were right in that I was meaning for it to be dark hole'd or torrential'd, but the point was that if they were to die together, through the sheer power of 'love' they'd return to the battlefield unharmed. Revised Effect. Once per turn, during either player's turn: You can discard 1 card; Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower Spellcaster-type monster to your opponent's side of the field. If a monster Special Summoned this way is destroyed: Special Summon it, and if this card is destroyed by the same effect, Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up Defense position. If this card was Special Summoned by the effect "Green-Eyed Sorceress": Its effect(s) are negated. That should fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted June 21, 2013 Report Share Posted June 21, 2013 Ah, then by all means pursue the flavor. I love cards inspired by a concept, wouldn't want to interefere there. Also, you worded it well enough, aside the last sentence. "If this card was Special Summoned by the effect of "Green-Eyed Sorceress", its effects are negated." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parsee Posted June 21, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2013 Revised again, thank you so very much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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