V2. Poki Draco Deck Special!

[buznet]

Hello everyone, this is the first deck i made and that i post here, but i can ensure all the cards are reasonable, and that i have put some thinking to them, even though it's simillar much to gadgets. but that's what happens when you focus on poki draco! 

 

This deck is me trying to take a bad card, which you never saw in play, and make a whole deck around it that will make it become playable. the card i'm talking about is Poki Draco

 

V2!!!

Updated:

1. fixed the missing 'dragon-type' text of the baby dragons

2. fixed so cannon can't defend any none dragon-type monster

3. added 2 new cards! (Sorry 1 of them have real ygo artwork! but he's not that known)

 

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Egg Draco

When this card is Normal Summoned or special Summoned: You can add 1 Level 3 FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand.

Shooting Baby Dragon

You can discard this card to the graveyard; Add 1 Level 3 FIRE monster from your Deck to your hand, except "Shooting Baby Dragon". If you Normal Summoned a level 3 FIRE monster this turn, you can activate this card effect from your hand: you can Normal Summon 1 additional time this turn. Each one of this effects can only be activated once while this card is in your hand.

Aiming Baby Dragon

You can discard this card to the graveyard to destroy 1 spell\trapcard your opponent controls. If you NormalSummoned a Level 3 FIRE monster this turn, you can activate this card effect from your hand: you can NormalSummon 1 additional time this turn. thiseffect can only be activated once while this card is in your hand.

 

Cannon Baby Dragon

You can discard this card to the graveyard; This turn, yourmonsters cannot be destroyed by cardeffects. If you NormalSummoned a Level 3 FIRE monster this turn, you can activate this card effect from your hand: you can NormalSummon 1 additional time this turn. thiseffect can only be activated once while this card is in your hand.

Lizard Draco

When this card is Normal Summoned, you can add 1 Level 5 or 6 Dragon-Type FIRE monster from your deck to your hand.

Lava Draco

You can discard Dragon-Type FIRE monster(s) whose total Levels equal 6 or more, then Special Summon this card (from your hand or Graveyard). When this card is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard: Target 1 card your opponent controls; destroy that target. When this Face-up card is targeted by an effect, destroy it. When this card is destroyed by a card effect and sent to the Graveyard, Add 1 Level 3 Dragon-Type FIRE monster from your graveyard to your hand.

Help Me!

Add 1 Level 3 or lower FIRE monster from you graveyard to your hand.

Rooster Warrior

2 Level 3 FIRE Monsters
Once per turn, You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: shuffle 1 monster from your graveyard to your Deck to add 1 level 3 FIRE monster from you Deck to your Hand.

Draco Meteor

2 Level 3 FIRE Monsters
Once per turn, You can Detach 1 Xyz Material from this card: Shuffle 1 monster from your graveyard to your Deck to destroy 1 card your opponent controls.

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Cards in real-life that supports the deck:

1. Masked Dragon

2. Cards Of Consonance

[♥Kisumi-nee]

Oooooh I think I'm gonna like this archetype! Btw, you have to post the Card Lores (Card Descriptions)

 

Would provide the review after you do so. Can't load the vid, net is way too bad. :c

[buznet]

Oh i didn't knew, thanks i edited the post.

[♥Kisumi-nee]

Review: 

 

• Egg Draco: A lovely card with such lovely effect. It has quite an appealing blend to it's simplicity. It supports the Archetype well.
• Shooting Baby Dragon: Okay, this card and the other 2 cards(Aiming and Cannon) effs can be quite abusable perhaps limiting it to Once per turn? And if you have already intended it to be that way, wording should be "This effect of a "Baby Dragon" monster can only be used once per turn.
• Aiming Baby Dragon: Same as above
• Cannon Baby Dragon: Same as above
• Help Me: I see nothing wrong with this card. Good job on this one.
• Rooster Warrior: Rooster warrior makes this deck quite flexible if you ask me, good job on this one.
• Draco Meteor: Nothing wrong with this either

Overall: I really like this archetype. I would love to await further cards in the future from this Archetype.

[buznet]

Wow, huge thanks on the long Review! i appreciate all your comments. about the baby dragons, each one of them is already limited to once per turn, but changing them to what you wanted might also be good cause it prevent summoning more then 1 xyz\synchro a turn. if i'l make strong synchros for the deck in the future i might do this.

Thanks!  

[buznet]

bump? O: it's a really small deck you guys~! o:

[gokol]

The Baby dragons don't have Level in their effects.
 

[buznet]

Fixed

[Therrion]

This wouldn't really go to far to make Poki Draco himself better, but add more versatility to FIRE Decks. Teh RotA/WRA for Lv. 3 or FIRE Monsters would help Synchro Builds of Fire Fists, and Shooting Baby Dragon would do basically the same thing. I can see where it helps, and kudos to the creativity, but I think you'd moreso see the above to spread out between all FIRE Decks (which isn't too much of a bad thing, but worth mentioning).

Overall, the effects were rather repetitive continuation of copy and paste with different effects. The Search discarder is fine (though repetitive with the Spell you created), the SS1 MST is decent, but the OTK Pusher is a little far. I completely disagree with the need of this card, as I don't believe there should be an OTK Pusher of this caliber for such an easy to use effect.

The Xyz Monsters die off on the creativity trail, but pick up on the much needed utility in the Deck.

 

Overall, I like most of the cards you made, but I think the OTK pusher should be toned down a bit, and the searchers (excluding Xyz Monster) could probably be made to search only Lv. 3 or lower FIRE Dragon-Types to ensure you don't make some broken Fire Fist Deck/etc.

Sorry, somewhat scatterthought as of this moment, some of what I said may not have been said in the best way. If anything is confusing, just ask and I'll attempt to clarify.

[buznet]

Thank you for your long comment, i a appreciate it very much. this are my answers:
1. resolving around level 3 FIRE and not just dragon-type actually made cause the baby dragons were winged-beasts before, and for making the text shorter to read. but now that they are dragons, this might be a fair change i need to make.
2. Making a bad card such as Poki to become batter as a card is impossible, but the only way to make him playable is to make a deck for him that he fits in it. it's from unplayable to unplayable you can say.
3. What OTK pusher are you talking about??? the last baby just defend monsters for a turn, not giving any swarm and effects repeat abilities.
4. The XYZ might have effects so known in yugioh(although not the shuffling part which is important), but my mission was to make a good reasonable cards that you might see in real-life, not a grandiose effects. the searching was exactly needed, and the boss that can destroy is the only way for the deck to win. in my future archetypes i try to make them more creative. i have one idea actually right now XD
About the Baby cards, the searchers(Draco cards) are very weak and cant stay on the field by themselves, so you will always neeed an Xyz play with them, and that's why i made 3 similar cards for consistency. but i might take the advice to make them more different.

In general i might change once and for all the dragon-type text issue, change at least 1 of the baby dragons to be different, and might add a new FIRE 'machina fortress', so the searchers will have more use and the deck will have more options. that will be the V2 of the deck.

[Therrion]

Cannon can be splashed (the one I called OTK Pusher) to discard when your are about to go off. Whenever I see a hand trap or discard monster, people are usually saying that their glad it doesn't do basically what this card does. I don't care to much for it, but it was moreso a "you might get criticised" if more people come into the thread.

 

I know it is about Poki Draco, and you had a great idea on the Babies to make it more playable. It would basically have to be played, as you made a lot of Tuners but not many non-Tuners---though I guess you could Xyz with Two Tuners. Would be interesting to go into Horse Prince in this deck however.

 

I in no way insulted your Xyz Monsters. They fit perfectly into the Deck you wish to support and all basically required for the Deck to churn. You did perfect on them, basically.

 

I don't know how good the Machina Fortress would be for FIRE, as it is only great for Machines due to Gearframe and high level Machina targets for him. FIRE doesn't have such an easy search for discard fodder, they would have to go try hard to reach the high level (which would probably have to be 6 for the sake of this archetype).

[buznet]

-O you meant because it's effect is generic? although this deck plays are very limited and people today target more with veiler\brackthrough,CED and stuff rather then destroying. but i fixed it in V2. 

-actually there isn't any reason to xyz with 2 tuners, there a 2 non-tuner searchers(now 3), and 3 tuner that gives additional summon(were made tuners just for the cool factor of using real-life cards like consonance), and bringing this tuners to the field will be a Waste cause they still have discarding effect, and there isn't almost any level 6 Synchro that worth bringing beside that new ocg tiger.

-About the Xyz, you dont have to apologize, i totally agree with you! and i appreciate any relevant critics. their effects of searching and destroying aren't refreshing at all, but were only needed for the deck. my next deck is going to be very different on that aspect.

i'm kinda sad to make cards like fortress which are similar to gadgets, but having to focus on poki draco who's a searcher, well, it kinda made me do it. but my new archtype is going to be hell different, i promise! o:

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V2 guys!

Updated:

1. Fixed the missing 'dragon-type' text of the baby dragons

2. Fixed so cannon can't defend any none dragon-type monster

3. Added 2 new cards!