Inferno I20 Posted July 4, 2013 Report Share Posted July 4, 2013 Enfer Noyau Roughly translated means "Hell Core". Their playstyle revolves around activating there effects when sent to the Graveyard by the effect of another "Enfer Noyau" card. They mainly swarm to either Xyz or Synchro with boss monsters on both spectrums. They are mainly an offensive deck with effects of destroying or disrupting your opponent to gain advantage then recycling from the grave to continue the onslaught. Each "Enfer Noyau" represents a piece of a body [spoiler=Monsters] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Coeur] "Coeur" - French for heart Lore: You can send this card to the Graveyard to add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster from your Deck to your hand, except "Enfer Noyau - Coeur". If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, you can Special Summon 1 "Enfer Nayou" monster from your Graveyard, except "Enfer Noyau - Coeur" and all monsters you control gain 500 ATK until the End Phase. It cannot attack. The effect of "Enfer Noyau - Coeur" can only be activated once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Guider] Guider - French for head Lore: When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster, except "Enfer Noyau - Guider", from your Graveyard to your hand then send another "Enfer Noyau" monster to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, except Enfer Noyau - Guider", destroy 1 card or banish a card in either Graveyard. This effect of "Enfer Noyau - Guider" can only be activated once per turn. Once per turn, you can target 1 in your Graveyard to have all "Enfer Noyau" monster levels become the Level of the targeted card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Droit Pauvre] "Droit Pauvre" - French for right arm Lore: This card gains 100 ATK for each "Enfer Noyau" monster in your Graveyard. When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster, except "Enfer Noyau - Droit Pauvre", from your Graveyard to your hand then send another "Enfer Noyau" monster to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, except "Enfer Noyau - Droit Pauvre", take control of 1 face-up monster your opponent controls until the End Phase. It cannot attack. The effect of "Enfer Noyau - Droit Pauvre" can only be activated once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Gauche Pauvre] "Gauche Pauvre" - French for left arm Lore: You can send this card to the Graveyard, negate the next attack. When this card is Summoned, you can add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster, except "Enfer Noyau - Gauche Pauvre", from your Graveyard to your hand then send another "Enfer Noyau" monster to the Graveyard. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, except "Enfer Noyau - Gauche Pauvre", halve the ATK of 1 monster and have another monster gain that same amount. The effect of "Enfer Noyau - Gauche Pauvre" can only be activated once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Péniches] "Péniches" - French for feet Lore: You can send this card to the Graveyard to target 1 set card, it cannot be flipped face-up or activated. You can discard 1 "Enfer Nayou" monster to Special Summon this card from your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, except "Enfer Noyau - Péniches", Special Summon up to 2 "Enfer Nayou Tokens" (Fiend-Type/DARK/Level 2/ATK 0/DEF 1200) in Defense Position. These Tokens can be used to Xyz Summon a monster. You can only activate the effect of "Enfer Noyau - Péniches" once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Centre Une] "Centre Une" - French for center one Lore: You can send the top card of your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon this card and add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster from your Graveyard to your hand. If this card is sent to the Graveyard by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card, except "Enfer Noyau - Centre Une", banish 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster and activate its effect as if it was discarded by the effect of an "Enfer Noyau" card. During your second Standby Phase after this card's activation, add that card to your hand. You can only activate the effect of "Enfer Noyau - Centre Une" once per turn. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Moitié Dame (Xyz)] "Moitié Dame" - French for half king Lore: 2 Level 4 "Enfer Noyau" monsters Once per turn, during either player's turn, when your opponent activates a Spell Card, Trap Card, or monster effect: you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card and discard 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster to negate the activation, and if you do, destroy it then destroy 1 card on the field. While this card has an Xyz Material, switch the original ATK and DEF of all monsters on the field. You can only control 1 face-up "Enfer Noyau - Moitié Dame" on the field. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Enfer Noyau - Singularité Dieux (Synchro)] "Singularité Dieux" - French for Singularity God Lore: 1 DARK Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner "Enfer Nayou" monsters Once per turn, you can discard up to 2 "Enfer Nayou" monsters to send an equal amount of cards on the field to the graveyard. Once per turn, each time a "Enfer Noyau" monster is sent to the graveyard, except by this card's effect, send 1 random card from your opponent's hand to the Graveyard. During each of your opponent's End Phases, you can target 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster in your Graveyard and add it to your hand. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Spells] [spoiler=Precious Core of the Enfer Noyau] Lore: Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects by discarding 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster: -Send 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster from your Deck to the Graveyard. -Add 1 "Enfer Noyau" monster from your Graveyard to your hand, except the "Enfer Noyau" monster discarded for this effect. -Draw 1 card. You can only use the effect of "Precious Core of the Enfer Noyau" once per turn. [/spoiler] [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted July 7, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2013 50 views and not a single reply...really? Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanea Posted July 10, 2013 Report Share Posted July 10, 2013 This is probably one of the best archetypes that I've seen on here! I love the artwork! It really generates a sense of integration of all the cards into one, powerful force, only exemplified by the very well thought out effects. I love how much these cards work as a team. And the artwork looks professionally done. Did you do it yourself? o: Anyhow, if you're looking for review, I tried my hardest to nitpick. ^^ There really isn't anything wrong with the overall concept. There are just a few technicalities that I thought I should point out. The monsters don't specify from where they send other "Enfer Noyau" monsters to the Graveyard. Also, I think that you should limit the recycling capabilities to only a few cards rather than having it as a trademark effect of the entire set. That level of recycling capability isn't needed. The wording on "Gauche Pauvre" should read "When your opponent declares an attack: You can send this card from your hand or field to the Graveyard; negate the attack." The effect of "Pèniches" should Special Summon Level 4 Tokens instead of Level 2 as to provide greater ease in Xyz Summoning "Moitiè Dame" if that is your goal. "Singularitè Dieux" does a bit too much in my opinion. I would get rid of the "discard 1 random card" side effect to keep the balance. Phew! That actually took a long time to find anything wrong here. Even then, these are all just suggestions. I really did enjoy this archetype, and I can't wait to see more from you! c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted July 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2013 Finally someone said something! Thank you! I actually saved the pictures for the archetype a long time ago and i dont remember from who but i just never got to figure out how to make an archetype for them to work until now. Well only the level 4s are capable of recycling bar Gauche and Centre Une (and the Synchro). I thought only having 2 to recycle was kind of small so i upped it to Gauche and Centre Une. I might decrease it to Only 3 (Droit, Guider and Gauche) Centre Une i think only needs to Special Summon instead of recycling because the deck revolves around that (originally wanted to just use Coeur but it would have been slow). I thought the sending effect was kind of implied because it was add to the hand and send another 1 (from the hand) but if it doesnt work like that ill change it. Yeah I knew Gauche Pauvre was supposed to have that grammar but I couldnt fit the space in before it scrunched up all the text smaller so i worked with what i got so it was like necro gardna. The reason why I did Peniches was because it allows for more versatility with other Synchro or Xyz (like you can synchro for 4,6,8 or Xyz for 2) The way to get Moitie Dame is to use Guider's effect to change their levels because Moitie Dame is freaking powerful and I didnt want Peniches to be an easy Xyz. I might change the effect of Centre Une to instead of recycle add another way to alter levels but on a smaller scale unlike Guider that does all. Singularitie Deux I thought would have had too few effects and decided to add another which was the discard ability. But his first ability might be too powerful so I can change that. Or I can have it so his effect can only activate once per turn so you cant abuse both in the same turn. That or I can have a new effect like "You can banish 1-2 "Enfer Noyau" to have all monsters your opponent controls lose 100 ATK and DEF for each "Enfer Noyau" in the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Amanea Posted July 14, 2013 Report Share Posted July 14, 2013 Oh! I missed Guider's effect there. Yeah, it's much more balanced to have a more conditional Summon for Moitiè Dame. I mustn't have read his effect. xD That's crazy. I would even consider having him require 3 Level 4 monsters. I think that a 3 card recycling engine is powerful enough. And I do like the new effect for Deux much better. ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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