Farfetched - Flying Rabbit

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http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/293131-card-ideas-and-concepts-discussion-thread-discuss-your-ideas-with-each-other-here/?p=6234594

When this card is Normal Summoend while you control monsters: You can reveal 1 monster in your hand; Special Summon 2 “Farfetched Tokens” (?-Type/DARK/Level ?/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. Their type and Level are the same type and Level as the revealed card’s. These Tokens cannot be Tributed. Once per turn when this card declares an attack: You can target “Farfetched Token” you control; switch control of that target and the monster this card is attacking, then switch the attack target to that target. Monsters switched by this effect become the Level of the switched Token, also they cannot attack or be attacked. Return all monsters to their original owners during the end of the turn this effect was activated.

[thesynchrohero]

But what level are the tokens

[.codex]

But what level are the tokens

Sorry about that, I posted in the lore that they levels were suppose to be that off the reveal card. I'll have the right version up soon.

[Sora1499]

Wow, rather original design if I must say so myself, and a bit of a mouthful.  So I'll break this card's parts down in pieces.

 

First clause:  I'm not entirely sure why you put that in there, so some clarification would be nice.  I'm not saying that you should remove it, I'm just asking why it's there in the first place.

Token Summoning: Thank god you can't Xyz with tokens, or else we'd have insta-rank 4s out the wazoo.  Fortunately, since this card isn't a tuner and the tokens aren't tuners, there's no inherent problem with summoning 2 right off the bat.  Or is there?  If you happen to control a tuner upon this card's summon, which is easy to do with cards like Quickdraw Synchron and Unknown Synchron, you can go potentially bananas with Synchro summoning.

Switching Control Clause: So, basically, you can dish out damage regardless of what your opponent has.  Mmmmmk.  You also get to steal opponent's monsters as an extra reward to Xyz with...  Seems a little fishy to me.

Final Clause: Thank God for this clause, or else this card would basically be a walking change of heart.  Still, aforementioned Xyz abuse and Synchro abuse still exists...

 

I suggest that you add/edit 2 clauses to this card: "You cannot special summon monsters from your extra deck the turn you use this effect" and "When this card is normal summoned while you control no monsters."

 

I've gotta give you props for originality.  The card is a tad on the questionable side, but with my fixes, it should be fine.

[.codex]

Wow, rather original design if I must say so myself, and a bit of a mouthful.  So I'll break this card's parts down in pieces.

 

First clause:  I'm not entirely sure why you put that in there, so some clarification would be nice.  I'm not saying that you should remove it, I'm just asking why it's there in the first place.

Token Summoning: Thank god you can't Xyz with tokens, or else we'd have insta-rank 4s out the wazoo.  Fortunately, since this card isn't a tuner and the tokens aren't tuners, there's no inherent problem with summoning 2 right off the bat.  Or is there?  If you happen to control a tuner upon this card's summon, which is easy to do with cards like Quickdraw Synchron and Unknown Synchron, you can go potentially bananas with Synchro summoning.

Switching Control Clause: So, basically, you can dish out damage regardless of what your opponent has.  Mmmmmk.  You also get to steal opponent's monsters as an extra reward to Xyz with...  Seems a little fishy to me.

Final Clause: Thank God for this clause, or else this card would basically be a walking change of heart.  Still, aforementioned Xyz abuse and Synchro abuse still exists...

 

I suggest that you add/edit 2 clauses to this card: "You cannot special summon monsters from your extra deck the turn you use this effect" and "When this card is normal summoned while you control no monsters."

 

I've gotta give you props for originality.  The card is a tad on the questionable side, but with my fixes, it should be fine.

The main idea was for this archetype to steal your opponent's monsters, and then make Xyz Monsters out of them. I'll maybe change part about monsters around.

[Therrion]

You turn a token into a Change of Heart, yes, but only for the BP and beyond. I don't suggest allowing the stolen monster to attack. That would leave only MP2 Xyz Summoning before return, which is a fine card and a fine effect, balanced and all the stuff. Most other stuff Sora has stated, so I won't go to restate.

Nice job on the originality, as it is brimming with it.

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You turn a token into a Change of Heart, yes, but only for the BP and beyond. I don't suggest allowing the stolen monster to attack. That would leave only MP2 Xyz Summoning before return, which is a fine card and a fine effect, balanced and all the stuff. Most other stuff Sora has stated, so I won't go to restate.

Nice job on the originality, as it is brimming with it.

Originally is my middle name. No seriously it is. Look at my birth certificate. Anyway, yeah, I'll make the card unable to attack. That could get cheap, and isn't really my point anyway.

[Therrion]

That middle name joke is, ironically, so unoriginal that it just made your middle name "unoriginal".