L0SS Posted July 10, 2013 Report Share Posted July 10, 2013 2 Xyz monsters Must first be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards from either side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster on the field; this card gains 300 ATK. If this card is targeted by the effect of an Xyz monster, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster you control, and negate the effect. [hr] Some mother-loving anti-Xyz stuff. Its applications are pretty obvious, and I'm not sure how balanced it would be. It can take down your Opponent's Xyzs, but also needs Xyzs on the field to sustain it, so that acts as a balancing point. R4R Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted July 10, 2013 Report Share Posted July 10, 2013 I don't really know if I dig the fact that the way you Summon it makes it impossible for your opponent to respond to it. I suggest you change that around. Other than that, it's alright. It's ATK gain seems rather useless, while it's neat to take your opponent's materials, it's most likely not gonna happen if you get this out, since at that point, they probably don't have any, and it's also not the best gain in the world either. The later effect is also kinda eh, for the same reasons, while it's nice it cannot be targeted, why would they even target it in the first place if you have an Xyz Monster on the field? That is of course something you cannot really avoid, though your opponent can also take advantage of this, and power down your Xyz Monster, though they will waste their resources on it. It's interesting, and a Fusion Monster is always digged, even if the Summoning is pretty cheap, so make it so it targets them, and then sends those targets, and I'll be a little more fine with it. My OCG fix: Hover your cursor over the dotted lines to read my reasons for the fixes. I do not repeat if you have made the flaw more than once, instead will it be bold (if any). Anything in italic is simple typos (if any). Also, if you have the time, check out my [url=http://tinyurl.com/ocgthread]OCG Thread.[/url] 2 Xyz Monsters Must first be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards from either side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster on the field; this card gains 300 ATK. If this card is targeted by the effect of an [acronym='Monster in Xyz Monster is always capitalized']Xyz Monster[/acronym][acronym='A condition has been met, so a colon is needed']: You[/acronym] can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster you control and negate the effect. (I am guessing this isn't suppose to be a cost, though you can correct me on that one). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted July 11, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2013 I don't really know if I dig the fact that the way you Summon it makes it impossible for your opponent to respond to it. I suggest you change that around. Other than that, it's alright. It's ATK gain seems rather useless, while it's neat to take your opponent's materials, it's most likely not gonna happen if you get this out, since at that point, they probably don't have any, and it's also not the best gain in the world either. The later effect is also kinda eh, for the same reasons, while it's nice it cannot be targeted, why would they even target it in the first place if you have an Xyz Monster on the field? That is of course something you cannot really avoid, though your opponent can also take advantage of this, and power down your Xyz Monster, though they will waste their resources on it. It's interesting, and a Fusion Monster is always digged, even if the Summoning is pretty cheap, so make it so it targets them, and then sends those targets, and I'll be a little more fine with it. My OCG fix: Hover your cursor over the dotted lines to read my reasons for the fixes. I do not repeat if you have made the flaw more than once, instead will it be bold (if any). Anything in italic is simple typos (if any). Also, if you have the time, check out my OCG Thread. 2 Xyz Monsters Must first be Special Summoned (from your Extra Deck) by sending the above cards from either side of the field to the Graveyard. (You do not use "Polymerization".) Once per turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster on the field; this card gains 300 ATK. If this card is targeted by the effect of an [acronym='Monster in Xyz Monster is always capitalized']Xyz Monster[/acronym][acronym='A condition has been met, so a colon is needed']: You[/acronym] can detach 1 Xyz Material from a monster you control and negate the effect. (I am guessing this isn't suppose to be a cost, though you can correct me on that one). A nice, extensive review, Zazu. Thank you. I supposing the summoning condition is a little cheap, I'll make it target. As for the other effects, could it get away with something more powerful? The attack gain isn't huge, but it does stack, if that is any consolation. Also, no, that last effect wasn't supposed to be a cost. Cheers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted July 11, 2013 Report Share Posted July 11, 2013 A nice, extensive review, Zazu. Thank you. I supposing the summoning condition is a little cheap, I'll make it target. As for the other effects, could it get away with something more powerful? The attack gain isn't huge, but it does stack, if that is any consolation. Also, no, that last effect wasn't supposed to be a cost. Cheers. Probably. I doubt still will be run that often, though as a side it's alright, so boosting it is alright with me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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