Dryad Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 (Made-up) Card Bio: Ar'menlic was a very lazy dragon among his brother's and sisters. He was never very strong, nor was he was the most swiftest among his kin, all poor Ar'menlic had that made him even noticeable and not his kin's next meal was his hide. His hide was tougher then the strongest spell which could slay his kin. His hide was so hard as well that not even the mightiest of warriors could even make a crack in his hide. In a great war, Ar'menlic glimpsed for the 1st time the horror of his kin being slayed before his open eyes. He began to go into a rage and although he couldn't fight back with any normal means of power, he destroyed himself in order to turn the tides of battle and wipe out many enemies, whether they were weakest or the strongest, they all fell before this mighty creature's dormant power. To this day, Ar'menlic has earned the nickname "The Sleeping Volcano". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 A bit overpowered, and the OCG is a little off, and you don't say you can only have 1 copy of this in your deck... :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Overpowered, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Can you tell me whats overpowered? Because if you tell me only "Broken" or "Overpowered" and nothing more I cannot relate to what you mean, but if you happen to tell me whats wrong with the card, I can most likely fix it to be more balanced. :) @ casaditymaker: Weird, I thought that was viable OCG usage, oh well must just be me. :razz: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Think. You have the card, that wields you a victory by ultimate deleting Life Points. Summon this card, destroy it, then use Monster reborn, again and finnaly place Call of Hounted or Premature Burial...-6600 :D...Its better than all cards in burn Deck, becouse it got power to delete quarter of players full Life Points, by just placing a monster and tributin it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Well its redone, I cut his damage in half. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Now its good... What the Sub-Type Conyured means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted March 16, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 con·jure (kŏn'jər, kən-jʊr') pronunciation v., -jured, -jur·ing, -jures. v.tr. 1. To summon (a devil or spirit) by magical or supernatural power. 2. To influence or effect by or as if by magic: tried to conjure away the doubts that beset her. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atomix Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 pic a bit blurry, 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Thanks. From wich language it is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SushiTheLegend Posted March 16, 2008 Report Share Posted March 16, 2008 Conjure is an english word that is probably derived from something else. Fairly nice card but the OCG as it has been said is a bit off, and you should change the damage so it depends on something how much damage it inflicts, and the image is a bit iffy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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