ポケモン—Red Posted July 27, 2013 Report Share Posted July 27, 2013 [spoiler=Kanto Pokemon 6/151] [/spoiler] [spoiler=Special Pokemon] NONE [/spoiler] [spoiler=updates] 27/7/13-Posted, Bulbasaur, Charmander and Squirtle added. 30/7/13-Updates, Special Section and Shiny Raichu added. [/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ポケモン—Red Posted July 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 bump. If you want to see more from this set please rate the 3 cards I have done. I have Ivysaur, Charmeleon, Wartortle and Missingno. in the works. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ポケモン—Red Posted July 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 Added Shiny Raichu, Special and Updates Section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted July 30, 2013 Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 Bulbasaur Seems rather pointless, unless you just want cards from your hand into the Graveyard. However, this is hardly ever true, and the benefit you get from discarding is hardly worth discarding period. OCG Fix Once per turn: You can discard any amount of cards; gain 100 Life Points for each card discarded. My version Once per turn: You can discard any amount of cards, and if you, gain 600 Life Points for each card discarded. ________________________________ Charmander Decent, where I'd expect a Basic Pokemon to be. Can target all your opponent's monsters at once, also, which makes the low stats and only effect that doesn't net advantage nice. OCG Fix Target 1 monster your opponent controls; that card loses 500 ATK during each Main Phase 1. ________________________________ Squirtle A one card Battle Phase lockdown, which is never a good thing, though they have to attack this card specifically so you'd have to bank on Squirtle not being destroyed/banished/etc by other means, which could go horribly wrong. OCG Fix When this Attack Position card is targeted for an attack by a monster with more ATK than this card: Switch this card to Defense Position, then, negate the attack and end the Battle Phase. ________________________________ Raichu See Volcanic Slicer, which straight up outclasses this card. That is to say, if you plan on having these out there with the other real cards. Also, this goes to show your Evolution Pokemon are just Tribute monsters? I can't find this card's stats, either. OCG Fix Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; inflict 500 damage to your opponent. You cannot declare an attack during the turn you activate this effect. My version Once per turn: You can discard 1 card; destroy 1 monster on the field, and if you do, inflict 500 damage to your opponent. This card cannot attack during the turn you activate this effect. ________________________________ May I suggest you put their effects under them, and also add stats to Raichu? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ポケモン—Red Posted July 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 Cheers for CnC, Stage 2 of the Starters in Progress. Mightaswell scrap the Shiny section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted July 30, 2013 Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 I have to say I dislike the direction of which you are heading. You are making the evolutions benefit from what their typing/etc. is, so they are basically Normal Monsters (aside from the Squirtle tree) with effects that should be a "in general" type of deal. For example, the Field Spell "Sunny Day" could just include FIRE and Plant-Type monsters gain 500ATK as opposed to wasting the room on Ivysaur, making it so Ivysaur could actually get some sort of effect. Also, you could go to add an effect if the Tribute Fodder for his Summon was his basic Pokemon. "If this card is Tribute Summoned by Tributing "Basic Pokemon", this card gains the following effect. *~~~". Then, the Stage 2 Pokemon, if there are for the evolution line, could be like the high Level Monarchs and only have to Tribute 1 if the Tribute is a Tribute Summoned monster (exg. a Stage 1 Pokemon). Ivysaur I don't understand why Rain Dance would power this guy down, to be honest. I mean, the only relevant thing I can think of is Hurricane becoming 100% accuracy. I can see, however, why Blizzard would reduce its ATK, but as I said above, just include those things on the Field Spell themselves. Charmeleon Absolutely no reason as to why this card should be Level 7. The effect is weak and the stats are those of a Level 5/6, and since its only a Stage 1 Pokemon, they should be located at that Level regardless. The effect is, again, weak, and should probably just be accepted as a general rule when a Pokemon of this Attribute/Type battles another Attribute/Type. Wartortle This card's effect makes no sense, but I imagine it as a counter for Messenger of Peace/Swords of Revealing/Blazing Light/etc., in which case, you could always just have his ability be to destroy face-up Spell/Trap Cards (like Six Samurai - Kamon). In the same regard, the effect isn't so good on a Tribute Monster to not be able to attack during the same turn, in my opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ポケモン—Red Posted July 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 Well, seeing what you just said I already fucked up Venusaur lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted August 1, 2013 Report Share Posted August 1, 2013 Your cards need A LOT of work. If you want some ideas, you can the Pokemon Cards that I've created myself. Here are the Links: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/272345-re-addedthe-poke-setby-yairnet/ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/272708-re-addedthe-limit-setby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/248128-re-named-and-re-addedthe-ultmtelite-setsby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/273238-re-addedthe-tuner-setby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/273236-re-addedthe-dtunr-and-turbo-setsby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/249573-re-addedthe-speed-and-ssped-setsby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/273223-re-addedthe-dream-setby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/266754-re-addedthe-dsync-setby-yairnet/http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/273461-re-addedthe-prtul-setby-yairnet/ http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/305141-new-setforms-set/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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