Gorgeuous Wings Archetype [4/?]

[Zazubat]

Salve. This Archetype about destroying themselves and shuffling them into the Deck. It's also meant to later on have some Fusion Monsters going on. It's still very early on, and these cards may not be the final versions either. We'll see about that though. Their names are all in latin. I used a translator, so it might not be perfect, but hey, I tried.

 

Main Deck Monsters

 

[spoiler=Incedia]

You can Normal Summon this card without Tributing, but its original ATK becomes 1300 and its Level becoms 1. When you do: You can add 1 “Gorgeuos Wings” Spell Card from your Deck to your hand. Twice per turn, if the only monsters you control are “Gorgeuous Wings” monsters, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent’s card effects. If you control a “Gorgeuous Wings” Spell Card, this effect is still applied if you control non-”Gorgeuous” monsters. If this card would be destroyed by battle, you can destroy 1 “Gorgueous Wings” card you control instead. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a “Gorgeuous Wings” card: Shuffle this card into the Deck.

 

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[spoiler=Vechi]

If you control no monsters, you can Special Summon this card (from your hand), but its original ATK becomes 1700, and its Level becoms 1, but this card cannot attack this turn. When you do: You can target 1 monster your opponent controls and reveal 1 “Gorgeuous Wings” monster in your hand; destroy 1 “Gorgeuous Wings” card you control and shuffle that target into the Deck. This effect of “Gorgeuous Wings - Vechi” can only be used once per turn. Twice per turn, f the only monsters you control are “Gorgeuous Wings” monsters, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent’s card effects. If you control a “Gorgeuous Wings” Spell Card, this effect is still applied if you control non-”Gorgeuous” monsters. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a “Gorgeuous Wings” card: Shuffle this card into the Deck.

 

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Spell Cards

[spoiler=Novam Vitam]

 

Once per turn, if a “Gorgeuous Wings” monster(s) is destroyed by the effect of a “Gorgeuous Wings” card: You can add 1 “Gorgeuous Wings” monster from your Deck to your hand. If a “Gorgeuous Wings” Spell Card you control would be destroyed by a card card, you can destroy this card instead. Once per turn: You can reveal 1 “Gorgeuous Wings” monster in your hand; shuffle that card into your Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a “Gorgeuous Wings” card: Shuffle this card into the Deck.

 

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[spoiler=Renati]

 

Each time a “Gorgeupus Wings” card is shuffled into the Deck, place 1 counter on this card for each of those cards. Once per turn: You can target “Gorgeuous Wings” Main Deck monster; Special Summon that target, then remove 2 counters from this card. You can destroy this card and shuffle 1 “Gorgeuous Wings” card from your Graveyard into the Deck, and if you do, draw 1 card. If this card is destroyed by the effect of a “Gorgeuous Wings” card: Shuffle this card into the Deck.

 

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[Therrion]

It is interesting, to say the least.

I can't say I like archetype wide destruction immunity. I don't feel like anything ever released would be like that, as it is unrealistic and, in my opinion, a horrible idea and pursuit at making an archetype.

I can't say I see too much reason in shuffling it back into the Deck, seeing how you plan to add Fusions later on (and seeing how Dragon's Mirror is a card).

I only want to address 1 of this cards, as the other two are perfectly fine and seem like they'd go to make a fun archetype in a way (excluding the immunity to destruction, seriously, that is just stupid).

 

Vechi

Here lies worry. This card can be used in any and all decks as a pseudo Spell Card that reads

Activate only if you control no monsters. Shuffle 1 monster your opponent controls into their Deck, then, shuffle this card into the Deck.

Outside the archetype, ofcourse. Would you want the above spell being a thing? Not really. You see, a spell like that may not cause that many problems, but in reality, this would just make a shift in how strong something could be before its broken. The above card would probably be limited. Sad thing is, calling it a spell is dumb, as this is more versatile. This is a body in the Grave, Tempest can search it (with both his effects, none the less) as many times as he can per duel (since this guy puts himself back in the Deck each time).

 

tl;dr Make it need other cards of the Archetype. exg. Make it require a GW Spell Card on the Field or a reveal in the hand of another GW.

[Zazubat]

It is interesting, to say the least.

I can't say I like archetype wide destruction immunity. I don't feel like anything ever released would be like that, as it is unrealistic and, in my opinion, a horrible idea and pursuit at making an archetype.

I can't say I see too much reason in shuffling it back into the Deck, seeing how you plan to add Fusions later on (and seeing how Dragon's Mirror is a card).

I only want to address 1 of this cards, as the other two are perfectly fine and seem like they'd go to make a fun archetype in a way (excluding the immunity to destruction, seriously, that is just stupid).

 

Vechi

Here lies worry. This card can be used in any and all decks as a pseudo Spell Card that reads

Activate only if you control no monsters. Shuffle 1 monster your opponent controls into their Deck, then, shuffle this card into the Deck.

Outside the archetype, ofcourse. Would you want the above spell being a thing? Not really. You see, a spell like that may not cause that many problems, but in reality, this would just make a shift in how strong something could be before its broken. The above card would probably be limited. Sad thing is, calling it a spell is dumb, as this is more versatile. This is a body in the Grave, Tempest can search it (with both his effects, none the less) as many times as he can per duel (since this guy puts himself back in the Deck each time).

 

tl;dr Make it need other cards of the Archetype. exg. Make it require a GW Spell Card on the Field or a reveal in the hand of another GW.

Hm, that is a problem. I'll find a way to make it so not every Deck can abuse it. I still sorta wish for it  to blow itself up, but that can also be powerful the the Deck itself. And, as said, this is still early on, many things can change. Oh, and the whole Deck thing, I'm expanding on that, and Dragons arn't the only type in this Archetype btw, they just happen to be the first two of the cards I made :P

[Zazubat]

I made a new card, along with changing the other cards a little bit.