Antonq23 Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 A new gagaga card which is used now for all-round gagaga decks instead of just the magician, child and girl gagaga deck which is usually more successful. The card generally adds more theme to the deck instead of just 3 different gagaga's. effect: 'If you control a face-up "Gagaga" monster, you can Special Summon this card from your hand abd declare 1 level from 5 to 8; the level of this card becomes that level until the End Phase. Once per turn: You can target 1 face-up Gagaga monster you control; the Level of that card becomes equal to the Level of this card. When this card is used as an Xyz Material, you cannot Summon another monster this turn. This card cannot be used as a Synchro Material. If you control a face-up "Gagaga Magician", this card cannot be Special Summoned.' Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Balance/Playability Excluding the main Gagaga from the chance of Summoning it definitely impacts the card's playability, but most of the time you'd rather just work off of Girl with this girl anyways, going into the Machu Mech and doing some great deal of damage. The card itself, like a lot of other Gagaga, rely on being able to hit another Gagaga on board before, and function off of that Gagaga to make an Xyz Monster. She generates no card advantage and impairs herself by excluding the main monster of the archetype with little to no reason (I read your reasoning, but decks will use him regardless and it should be accepted that such is true, limiting this to Girl ((Since Child has the same Summoning Conditions, though you COULD Normal Summon Child)) is just impairing to the card in the archetype). The ATK she has allows her to be Bottomlessed, but that isn't too noteworthy. Flavour/Originality The flavour behind excluding Magician isn't there. Though, Astronomy in relation to Star Editing is interesting. The picture is really bad quality and plain bad anyways even if it was HD. No originality whatsoever. Suggestions/Additional Comments Just accept that Gagaga Magician is part of the archetype and let it support it as well. I don't see a problem with the main guy in the archetype not benefiting from one of his archetype's cards. This would increase the consistancy of which you can Summon her and do nothing but good for the archetype without breaking it. OCG Fix If you control a "Gagaga" monster other than "Gagaga Astronomer" or "Gagaga Magician", you can Special Summon this card (from your hand). When this card is Summoned by this effect: Declare a Level between 5 and 8, then target 1 other "Gagaga" monster you control; the Level of this card and that target become the declared Level, until the End Phase. When this card is used as Xyz Material, you cannot Special Summon monsters for the rest of the turn. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ On a side note, welcome to Yu-gi-Oh! Card Maker. I didn't notice this was your first post until after I locked in what I had said, so my criticism may have been a little harsh but I think harsh criticism is the best way to build. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antonq23 Posted July 28, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 Okay, thanks. I suppose that it probably would fit better if it could be summoned with Magician and not Astronomer, but then maybe I would have to loosen some of the other effects. Although, I suppose if you're starting the duel, kid can be used with magician. I'll try and tweak it a bit. By the way, the picture quality was terrible I admit, but I have no clue how to make my own picture. Maybe if I put the effect 'This card is not effected by the effect of traps' and then put 'when this card is sent to the graveyard, you must pay 1000 life points' or 'discard 1 card from your hand'. Definitely cannot be used as a Synchro Material and only 1 Special Summon in that turn. Any advice on that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted July 28, 2013 Report Share Posted July 28, 2013 I didn't mean to make your own, as I understand that struggle. However, you could find a better one atleast :P I wouldn't suggest adding LP costs to it/discards, and this card not being affected is pointless as their gonna wait for the Xyz Summon to use their Traps most likely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Antonq23 Posted July 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2013 Yeah I tried but there wasn't many good ones. I know that gagagas generally have that Dark Magician cap on but I couldn't find a one with stars in the background unless I found the render and all of that but I really couldn't be bothered :P & okay, I guess I should just stick with it the way it is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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