Destructive Impact

[InkedRose]

Orignal Card:

 

Lore: If your opponent Special Summoned 3 or more Monsters on their previous turn: Destroy all Monsters on the Field.


After feedback and of course finally being awake I made THIS card;

 

 

Lore: If your opponent Summoned 3 or more Monsters during their previous turn: Remove all Monsters on the Field from play.

[Zazubat]

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Effect & Use: It isn't all that useful. On top of having it be only Special Summons, it requires a somewhat hard condition, and while most Decks do Special Summon many times, it is only really 2 times, as one can just be a Normal Summon most of the time. But, it can easily dead draw as well, something you don't really want, and it also hits your field, making it even more useless.

Design/Balance: It is a somewhat more balanced Dark Hole, I will give it that, while ultra nuke is not really good design, I don't find it too horrible, Dark Hole is mostly at 1 because of OTK stuff, this can't do that as easily.

Flavor/Image and Originality: Got no idea what the effect and image has to do with each other, how is a giant destruction related to them Summoning 3 times? Doens't make much sense. It isn't original either, it is Dark Hole but with a condition.

Overall: Dark Hole is already kind of meh for this format, this is pretty much the same, but with another condition. I don't see why you would use this or Dark Hole really. 3/10

OCG fix: Hover your cursor over the word(s) with the dotted lines to read my reasons for the fixes. Make sure to hover over more than one one word, as it might put the things I have to say together with the dotted lines (or view it with BBcode turned off, just copy and paste it and click the switch in the control pannel). I do not repeat if you have made the flaw more than once, instead will it be bold (if any). Anything in italic is simple typos (if any). Anything in red means that it is something that is missing and should be there, as well as dotted lines to explain my reasoning/ask why you may have forgotten (if any). Also, if you have the time, check out my OCG Thread.

 

If your opponent Special Summon 3 or more monsters during their previous turn[acronym='If you have a condition, you must also have a colon']: Destroy[/acronym] all monsters on the field.

NOTE: Please post lore, it makes it easier for me to make the OCG fix, it is also a requirement in Realistic Cards. Thank you.

[InkedRose]

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